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2/28/2005 c1 90poetic abortion
Your writing is really good. :) I was really surprised as to how great this was. :) You wrote a very good story and the plot was really cool. :P The characters were realistic but not overly so. :P All in all I liked it allot. ^-^ I think I may check out some more of your work. :P

!~* Noelle *~!
2/28/2005 c1 1JD Kennedy
Vast improvement on the old version, spookier and more detailed. There are only a few grammar errors ie no full stops in places but they are far and few between. It's obvious that your writing abilities are improving and greatly, your a great writer for your age (14!) and I can't wait to read more stuff from you, feel free to drop me a line whenever, I'll hopefully be able to reply, my e-mail's been a bit funky as of late. See you around.~JD

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