for Inverse Reality5/6/2005 c1 Lavnder
You know exactly what I think of this poem!:D
You know exactly what I think of this poem!:D
3/3/2005 c1 
9InSilverShadows
I remember this poem! He he, I remember wresting it from your hand as you screamed at me not to look!
Very nicely written. Love the rhythm of the poem... good meter. I love it!
Now you can go R&R Dragon's Embrace!
9InSilverShadowsI remember this poem! He he, I remember wresting it from your hand as you screamed at me not to look!
Very nicely written. Love the rhythm of the poem... good meter. I love it!
Now you can go R&R Dragon's Embrace!
3/2/2005 c1 12Arrow's Flight
Yeah! A beautiful poem.
Umm. . . What's up with all the dashes on the e's. Was that intintional(my spelling!)?
The ryhming is very nice. It really makes you consider your choices. What you could have done to change your life!
The first of many new poems I hope!
-Arrow's Flight-
12Arrow's FlightYeah! A beautiful poem.
Umm. . . What's up with all the dashes on the e's. Was that intintional(my spelling!)?
The ryhming is very nice. It really makes you consider your choices. What you could have done to change your life!
The first of many new poems I hope!
-Arrow's Flight-
3/1/2005 c1 15Macca Lane
this is brilnat relaly lyircla evne without kwing what it is about the first time you read it (i read it three times) it is still a joy to read i know what it feels like also to want to ahve naother chance
15Macca Lanethis is brilnat relaly lyircla evne without kwing what it is about the first time you read it (i read it three times) it is still a joy to read i know what it feels like also to want to ahve naother chance