for Fearful Trust8/22/2005 c1 
1Isin Moon
A beautiful poem, BRAVO! (note: I changed the title of my story to Forbidden Harmonies) I love that line 'they make me blind'. It's very deep, although not at first sight. Poetry is a great thing that goes very deep like... the sea. All you see at first sight is the surface, but when you wade in it, it is so much deeper.
1Isin MoonA beautiful poem, BRAVO! (note: I changed the title of my story to Forbidden Harmonies) I love that line 'they make me blind'. It's very deep, although not at first sight. Poetry is a great thing that goes very deep like... the sea. All you see at first sight is the surface, but when you wade in it, it is so much deeper.
5/15/2005 c1 untilI
Intresting poem, but you really should change the formating to fix the flow. Fictionpress screwed my formating over too, so don't feel to bad. I really liked it, keep up the good work.~Dream Forever
Intresting poem, but you really should change the formating to fix the flow. Fictionpress screwed my formating over too, so don't feel to bad. I really liked it, keep up the good work.~Dream Forever