for The Candle's Wax9/18/2006 c1 
7cramoisi-ombre
I blame my English classes for making me analyze everhting I read, but the whole part at the end "When the candle will neither drip nor flicker no longer" is that symbolism for the man and the woman both dying?
7cramoisi-ombreI blame my English classes for making me analyze everhting I read, but the whole part at the end "When the candle will neither drip nor flicker no longer" is that symbolism for the man and the woman both dying?
5/12/2005 c1 11Enigmatic Huntress
Are you leaving it there? I hope not. I really want to see them meet. I liked the descriptive detail in this. Add chapter 2 soon, luv Kaitx
11Enigmatic HuntressAre you leaving it there? I hope not. I really want to see them meet. I liked the descriptive detail in this. Add chapter 2 soon, luv Kaitx
3/5/2005 c1 1Squishy K
Much like your previous story, Response for the Towers, this was a pleasure to read. Your writing seems to come so naturally, and your description is simply beautiful. I was amazed that you were able to fit so much detail and emotion into so short a story. You're a very talented writer.
Keep writing!
1Squishy KMuch like your previous story, Response for the Towers, this was a pleasure to read. Your writing seems to come so naturally, and your description is simply beautiful. I was amazed that you were able to fit so much detail and emotion into so short a story. You're a very talented writer.
Keep writing!
3/3/2005 c1 4Nestalgica
*Much snapping follows*Very well done! It was very origional. I thought the only weird sentence was "He but a beggar", but you don't have to change a thing.
Good job! ^_~
~Max W.~
4Nestalgica*Much snapping follows*Very well done! It was very origional. I thought the only weird sentence was "He but a beggar", but you don't have to change a thing.
Good job! ^_~
~Max W.~