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for The Candle's Wax

9/18/2006 c1 7cramoisi-ombre
I blame my English classes for making me analyze everhting I read, but the whole part at the end "When the candle will neither drip nor flicker no longer" is that symbolism for the man and the woman both dying?
5/12/2005 c1 11Enigmatic Huntress
Are you leaving it there? I hope not. I really want to see them meet. I liked the descriptive detail in this. Add chapter 2 soon, luv Kaitx
3/6/2005 c1 3angieelique
very pretty~ i really like the tone of the story
3/5/2005 c1 1Squishy K
Much like your previous story, Response for the Towers, this was a pleasure to read. Your writing seems to come so naturally, and your description is simply beautiful. I was amazed that you were able to fit so much detail and emotion into so short a story. You're a very talented writer.

Keep writing!
3/3/2005 c1 4Nestalgica
*Much snapping follows*Very well done! It was very origional. I thought the only weird sentence was "He but a beggar", but you don't have to change a thing.

Good job! ^_~

~Max W.~
3/1/2005 c1 14Chen
Nice 'purple pretty prose'. Very descriptive indeed, lol, my style also. But it flowed really nicely, and it's so true about 'love'

3/1/2005 c1 84cookiemonster
i liked the curtain part...

very nice descriptions.


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