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1/19/2006 c1 33schizothief
very nice! kinda reminds me of beauty and the beast in a way.
9/19/2005 c1 5The Green Crow
Confusing. I'll read it again.

Haha! I get it. It's cool. Yeah.
7/1/2005 c1 103Unready
if a poem can be described as "trippy", that is most certainly what this is
5/16/2005 c1 6DennisP1
Short yet an interesting and entertaining moment captured.

Too often when we are young our self esteem becomes so low we feel hideous over relatively small imperfections. Like a pimple that takes on the semblance of a huge erupting volcano or a front tooth that has fallen out making us feel we will look like a freak or monster in another’s eyes.

Nice write, brought me back to those younger memories of myself, made me smile and long for more.

Den
5/10/2005 c1 8Written
wow! I like it XD
4/17/2005 c1 7swtdreamz101
interesting, kinda like the unveiling of a masked man who hides in the shadows for fear of showing his ravaged face, nice poem
3/6/2005 c1 8Darkhymns
wow...a bit confusing but enthralling. Very good! I loved it.
3/6/2005 c1 25Devika-Fay
wow...confusing...but very interesting at the same time...hmm...
3/2/2005 c1 182Jason Daniels
wicked

right on

live on the edge...

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