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10/6/2015 c1 4venatianwings
Loved this! Captured well and subtly - perfectly in character.
3/15/2005 c1 1s m e l l . o f . r a i n
Very nice poem, Retrogirl. Nice use of rhymes. Good job.
3/13/2005 c1 Lucian
My! Wow.

Thats one of the best poens I've read.

Its hard to get rhyme into poetry and have it sound good. I'm impressed. I love it. So much.

-clings to it-
3/13/2005 c1 2Gemma Viridian
Echo and Narcissus is my favorite Greek myth, and I think you did it justice with this poem. Very nice.
3/4/2005 c1 44catching-falling-stars
awesomeness! never stop writing! @_@
3/4/2005 c1 16ShOeLoVeR
I rele like this poem! i like the rhyming techniques and your word choices, especially in lines 5 & 6! Keep Writing!

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