for My Reincarnation9/18/2006 c1 
7cramoisi-ombre
"What the hell are you doing/Before my heart breaks" My life in a nutshell. Brief and powerful.
7cramoisi-ombre"What the hell are you doing/Before my heart breaks" My life in a nutshell. Brief and powerful.
7/15/2005 c1 11Enigmatic Huntress
Liked this. "My wrath just won't be bound" line sticks in my head the most. This seemed quite empowered. Only things I noticed were you used a full stop for one line but didn't for any others and shouldn't the last line have a question mark? Maybe you meant it not too. I just wondered. Otherwise though- this is really great work. Luv Kaitx
11Enigmatic HuntressLiked this. "My wrath just won't be bound" line sticks in my head the most. This seemed quite empowered. Only things I noticed were you used a full stop for one line but didn't for any others and shouldn't the last line have a question mark? Maybe you meant it not too. I just wondered. Otherwise though- this is really great work. Luv Kaitx
5/23/2005 c1 80citrus scented
wow that ending line is great! this really captures your strength, and defiancy against this person,. veyr effective poem.
80citrus scentedwow that ending line is great! this really captures your strength, and defiancy against this person,. veyr effective poem.
3/18/2005 c1 fiveforsilver
short but spiced with anger. I like it alot, especially the "My wrath just won’t be bound, I’m not a puppet, or a sound." I can relate.
short but spiced with anger. I like it alot, especially the "My wrath just won’t be bound, I’m not a puppet, or a sound." I can relate.
3/6/2005 c1 3angieelique
o... if i wasnt so tired right now, i could probably relate to this poem =P i really like the form you used in this poem~
3angieeliqueo... if i wasnt so tired right now, i could probably relate to this poem =P i really like the form you used in this poem~
3/5/2005 c1 16Wing Chant
That was rather interesting, but I didn't think your idea was concise and clear. To a reader, I think they would be a left confused as to what your poem is talking about. So, I suppose next time, you could make the idea more clear and understandable to the mind. I don't mean to sound mean, but I'm just giving you some pointers. ^_^ I hope it helps!
loserz. ;)
16Wing ChantThat was rather interesting, but I didn't think your idea was concise and clear. To a reader, I think they would be a left confused as to what your poem is talking about. So, I suppose next time, you could make the idea more clear and understandable to the mind. I don't mean to sound mean, but I'm just giving you some pointers. ^_^ I hope it helps!
loserz. ;)
3/5/2005 c1 6NebraskanSpy
I'm not sure what to say about this poem... I have a question: What is the poem about? Reading it, the poem seemed to jump from subject to subject. I didn't think it was very well organized. One thing I'll advise: don't force your poems to rhyme. I tell all fellow writers this; I even have to remind myself! Keep writing.
6NebraskanSpyI'm not sure what to say about this poem... I have a question: What is the poem about? Reading it, the poem seemed to jump from subject to subject. I didn't think it was very well organized. One thing I'll advise: don't force your poems to rhyme. I tell all fellow writers this; I even have to remind myself! Keep writing.