for Pea Soup
1011/29/2005 c1 hey maria
Yes, I've noticed that about fog too. Every time it's really foggy, I drive myself crazy trying to immerse myself in it but it doesn't work. Darn thing.
Lovely poem; I especially liked the lines "It is only a blurred vision/Of passing trees/Branches melding into one and other/Creating a brown blur/Against the blue backdrop/Like a smeared canvas." Your poems have great imagery.
Yes, I've noticed that about fog too. Every time it's really foggy, I drive myself crazy trying to immerse myself in it but it doesn't work. Darn thing.
Lovely poem; I especially liked the lines "It is only a blurred vision/Of passing trees/Branches melding into one and other/Creating a brown blur/Against the blue backdrop/Like a smeared canvas." Your poems have great imagery.