for bend and not break7/27/2005 c1 
26Chi Ame
This gave me chills. I don't know what to say, except; amazing work. It's truly beautiful and thoughtful.
26Chi AmeThis gave me chills. I don't know what to say, except; amazing work. It's truly beautiful and thoughtful.
7/11/2005 c1 52godsandstars
Oh God...so beautiful. "Graffiti dresses and permanent smiles/ Her eyes know no life." That was my favorite line. It's perfect. You did an absolutely amazing job on this.
52godsandstarsOh God...so beautiful. "Graffiti dresses and permanent smiles/ Her eyes know no life." That was my favorite line. It's perfect. You did an absolutely amazing job on this.
6/11/2005 c1 elenlinde
i like this. parallels between the real world and fantasy.
and no.
i dont believe her.
i like this. parallels between the real world and fantasy.
and no.
i dont believe her.
6/3/2005 c1 hmmmmm
this is beautiful. and anyone who uses the word 'plasticine' in their writing is awesome =)
this is beautiful. and anyone who uses the word 'plasticine' in their writing is awesome =)
5/1/2005 c1 64EmbersAblaze-IgnitedIcicle
it's like her image designed to fool is quite the dead giveaway that she expects to be broken.
64EmbersAblaze-IgnitedIcicleit's like her image designed to fool is quite the dead giveaway that she expects to be broken.
3/23/2005 c1 74laughter at the funeral
again...you have a style of your own that is absolutely excellent...and pls do review some of my poems...thanks...
truly yours...
74laughter at the funeralagain...you have a style of your own that is absolutely excellent...and pls do review some of my poems...thanks...
truly yours...
3/5/2005 c1 1k+Faithless Juliet
I really like this, it takes on a modern, and sureal tone to it. I can see the people and situations that your describing in this.Keep up the good work.
Much love,Juliet.
1k+Faithless JulietI really like this, it takes on a modern, and sureal tone to it. I can see the people and situations that your describing in this.Keep up the good work.
Much love,Juliet.