
4/12/2005 c1
17Twisted-Smile-Bitter-Style
Oh! Nice! I totally understand the German parts, too, which made my day:) nice imagery, and your dialogue is good, too.
thanks for your review:)

Oh! Nice! I totally understand the German parts, too, which made my day:) nice imagery, and your dialogue is good, too.
thanks for your review:)
3/15/2005 c1
31Freddie of Albion
A good story. A change from the poetry which shows you have a talent for both...A good read...look forward to hear more.

A good story. A change from the poetry which shows you have a talent for both...A good read...look forward to hear more.