for Down That Alley3/23/2006 c1 
879Moondog Dozier
The halting motion of this is marvelous. It keeps the reader moving through the words, and creates a consistent pace. Wonderful detail.
879Moondog DozierThe halting motion of this is marvelous. It keeps the reader moving through the words, and creates a consistent pace. Wonderful detail.
3/15/2005 c1 130b-U-b-TRUE
Hey! Good poem. I liked how you how associated your thoughts. Good rhythm too. Great job!
130b-U-b-TRUEHey! Good poem. I liked how you how associated your thoughts. Good rhythm too. Great job!
3/7/2005 c1 Fae. again
*stares* Creepy... I hate dark alley ways.. I always get shivers when I pass them. shiver me timbers.. I'm making no sense today.
*stares* Creepy... I hate dark alley ways.. I always get shivers when I pass them. shiver me timbers.. I'm making no sense today.