for Into the Game3/24/2005 c1 
1Dory-the-2nd
it's...normal...you need something to it, like she meets some guys at the mall or something.
you also need longer chapters. if someone sees that it's so short, they might not want to waste thier time
1Dory-the-2ndit's...normal...you need something to it, like she meets some guys at the mall or something.
you also need longer chapters. if someone sees that it's so short, they might not want to waste thier time