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3/9/2005 c1 Marie Silver
I don't usually read supernatural stuff (generally only fantasy) but this caught my eye. I like the angle you're going for, and what you've written has quite a unique style but sometimes parts of the story stray seem to stray from the plot. Also 'anyway/s' seems to be repetitive and struck out from the flow, however this could be characterisation and if so just ignore me.

I'm also a fan of X-Men and can see a similar kind of theme (nothing dramatically over the top though). I'll try to review when you update, but I'm busy a lot of the time so it might not be immediately. Good Stuff!

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