for Excaliber Waits6/12/2005 c1 
15MercuryMoon
I remember I read this quite a while ago and just never reviewed. Heh. Making up for it now.. ^^
Anyway, I remember you said something about your own fiction site that you moderate? That's awesome ^^
I love the stories of King Arthur and Camelot, especially 'The Once and Future King.' Man. Awesome book that is. I really like your wording of this poem. Plus it goes deeper than it actually seems. Excaliber sounds like a sword from Heaven that'll return justice and all good to the Earth. I think the third stanza is my favorite. Hard to explain why, but I just do. The fifth one is really good, too ^^
And school's finally out! (yess just had to say that XD..)
15MercuryMoonI remember I read this quite a while ago and just never reviewed. Heh. Making up for it now.. ^^
Anyway, I remember you said something about your own fiction site that you moderate? That's awesome ^^
I love the stories of King Arthur and Camelot, especially 'The Once and Future King.' Man. Awesome book that is. I really like your wording of this poem. Plus it goes deeper than it actually seems. Excaliber sounds like a sword from Heaven that'll return justice and all good to the Earth. I think the third stanza is my favorite. Hard to explain why, but I just do. The fifth one is really good, too ^^
And school's finally out! (yess just had to say that XD..)
3/8/2005 c1 24Sarah-Brighteyes
Amazing poem. I love the way it brings me back to King Arthur and excalibur. Excellent stanzas and flow. Your writing as usual is great. Good piece.
24Sarah-BrighteyesAmazing poem. I love the way it brings me back to King Arthur and excalibur. Excellent stanzas and flow. Your writing as usual is great. Good piece.