6/23/2005 c1 1thestonedfox
i know this poem's kind of old already but i found it in someone's fave list.
Wow. dude, this is really good. you picked the right words, rhymed it perfectly without trying hard and got your message across.
it's a different poem and i haven't een one like this in a while. in fact, i haven't seen anyone pull it off as good as you.
~champagnewishes
i know this poem's kind of old already but i found it in someone's fave list.
Wow. dude, this is really good. you picked the right words, rhymed it perfectly without trying hard and got your message across.
it's a different poem and i haven't een one like this in a while. in fact, i haven't seen anyone pull it off as good as you.
~champagnewishes
4/6/2005 c1 do not resuscitate
amazing descriptions. i love the rhyming and the word choice. god, this is just perfect.
amazing descriptions. i love the rhyming and the word choice. god, this is just perfect.
3/7/2005 c1 158outruntheavalanche
this is just awesome. i love the metaphors. i love the internal ryhme of favors/elevators.
this is just awesome. i love the metaphors. i love the internal ryhme of favors/elevators.
3/7/2005 c1 69this is britt
oh man. I think I love it. like the metaphor, the characters- and the title. as soon as I was at the Just In page and saw you, I had to check it out. it's awesome.
oh man. I think I love it. like the metaphor, the characters- and the title. as soon as I was at the Just In page and saw you, I had to check it out. it's awesome.