
7/21/2005 c1
11The Mad Gastly
Oh this is very good in my opinion. You had a lot of description and I like this a lot. I hope you continue with it ^_^

Oh this is very good in my opinion. You had a lot of description and I like this a lot. I hope you continue with it ^_^
7/19/2005 c1
25Risto
good job good job... i normally hate people that write vampire stories, but this was okay... hope you write more :)

good job good job... i normally hate people that write vampire stories, but this was okay... hope you write more :)
4/13/2005 c1
6KuhPow
Wow, this is such a good opener, I'll have to kepp an eye out for it in future. Poor Ja-Deem...

Wow, this is such a good opener, I'll have to kepp an eye out for it in future. Poor Ja-Deem...
3/9/2005 c1
13aquamoon222
A beautifull start. I really like the whole idea of this! wonderful job! ^_^

A beautifull start. I really like the whole idea of this! wonderful job! ^_^
3/7/2005 c1
1Evan Jameson
I really liked this. You set up a great beginning. I'm really curious to see how this will unfold. Post the next chapter soon.

I really liked this. You set up a great beginning. I'm really curious to see how this will unfold. Post the next chapter soon.