for Gun to the Head1/30/2012 c1 FudoTwin17
GASP! OO This same thing happened 2 my bro! OO This is one of the stories that I don't think i cod stop if i wanted 2! XD I LUVS IT! ;D
GASP! OO This same thing happened 2 my bro! OO This is one of the stories that I don't think i cod stop if i wanted 2! XD I LUVS IT! ;D
1/3/2011 c3 abcd
her bursts of "insanity" are so hillarious! i love them!
her bursts of "insanity" are so hillarious! i love them!
10/10/2009 c2 A-Disenchanted-Evening
I really really like this story, and I'm only on chapter 2! Wow, it's been a long time since I reviewed a story. I can't wait to see how this turns out.
I really really like this story, and I'm only on chapter 2! Wow, it's been a long time since I reviewed a story. I can't wait to see how this turns out.
3/1/2008 c5 Me
Oh please update this. If you already have the basic idea, please try to write it.
Oh please update this. If you already have the basic idea, please try to write it.
1/29/2008 c5 Teresa
I don't suppose that you're ever going to update this, but it's such a fantastic story. Like, the best i've read on this entire site.
Please update. I'm not the only one who wants you to continue this.
I don't suppose that you're ever going to update this, but it's such a fantastic story. Like, the best i've read on this entire site.
Please update. I'm not the only one who wants you to continue this.
8/22/2006 c5 Faedora
Gasp! Almost a whole damn year without an update! What's going on? I'm sitting here about to blow my top. Okay, not really, but honestly, this story is fantastic. I like it as much as I like Close Encounters Inc., which is a LOT. Even though the plots are entirely different, the writing is still brilliant, and the way Andrea and Dean are portrayed is still fantastic. I'm glad that they're getting somewhere, especially now that Andrea is willing to cooperate (though it is quite suspicious for Dean). I have a feeling that they're going to have a moderate amount of fun from here on, but needless to say, it's not going to be a smooth ride (no pun intended). I like how you've revealed a little bit of Dean's past or rather, his deepest secrets with us, and am I wrong in thinking that we're going to dive deeper into him, and also Andrea? :) Ah, heart to heart moments are always sweet x) Oh, yes, and how many chapters are you expecting? I take it that once Dean delivers his necklace to his boss, he'll want out, but then again, will the boss let him leave so easily? Some more trouble, and hopefully, a little fluff and love along the way :) But of course, too much fluff is purely nauseating, while none is rather depressing. Anyway, I'm rambled on long enough, and I have stupid camp coming up, so I must depart now. I sincerely hope you pick up your fabulous imagination and type out another chapter to this brilliant story. Ciao for now!
Gasp! Almost a whole damn year without an update! What's going on? I'm sitting here about to blow my top. Okay, not really, but honestly, this story is fantastic. I like it as much as I like Close Encounters Inc., which is a LOT. Even though the plots are entirely different, the writing is still brilliant, and the way Andrea and Dean are portrayed is still fantastic. I'm glad that they're getting somewhere, especially now that Andrea is willing to cooperate (though it is quite suspicious for Dean). I have a feeling that they're going to have a moderate amount of fun from here on, but needless to say, it's not going to be a smooth ride (no pun intended). I like how you've revealed a little bit of Dean's past or rather, his deepest secrets with us, and am I wrong in thinking that we're going to dive deeper into him, and also Andrea? :) Ah, heart to heart moments are always sweet x) Oh, yes, and how many chapters are you expecting? I take it that once Dean delivers his necklace to his boss, he'll want out, but then again, will the boss let him leave so easily? Some more trouble, and hopefully, a little fluff and love along the way :) But of course, too much fluff is purely nauseating, while none is rather depressing. Anyway, I'm rambled on long enough, and I have stupid camp coming up, so I must depart now. I sincerely hope you pick up your fabulous imagination and type out another chapter to this brilliant story. Ciao for now!
6/25/2006 c5 peace etc
this story is so amazing! You have to continue it! I love it! It's the best I've read of it's genre!
this story is so amazing! You have to continue it! I love it! It's the best I've read of it's genre!
12/20/2005 c5 
11Enigmatic Huntress
I found it rather amusing when he got all worked up over the sarcastic comment she made to her mother(well at least the cooment her mum took for sarcasm,) I bet his heart virtually stopped in the car.I understand her need for adventure, but I just hope she doesn't start becoming meek and obeying his every whim, although I doubt it. This chapter made it clear she will cooperate, but only if she is running the show on her own terms. It was nice to see Dean open up and talk about his family, hopefully we'll learn more about him and his past.They are both quite lonely , troubled characters( although D needs to work alone, he does seem to have slight things in common with her, even though they are from opposite ends of the tracks and on the surface are about as diffrent as two people can be.) Both are sarcastic, daring, independant, and loners to some extent. Like you made clear, she is not really close to her and family and tends to not have any real friends, so it makes sense they would be a connection between them.Luv Kaitx
11Enigmatic HuntressI found it rather amusing when he got all worked up over the sarcastic comment she made to her mother(well at least the cooment her mum took for sarcasm,) I bet his heart virtually stopped in the car.I understand her need for adventure, but I just hope she doesn't start becoming meek and obeying his every whim, although I doubt it. This chapter made it clear she will cooperate, but only if she is running the show on her own terms. It was nice to see Dean open up and talk about his family, hopefully we'll learn more about him and his past.They are both quite lonely , troubled characters( although D needs to work alone, he does seem to have slight things in common with her, even though they are from opposite ends of the tracks and on the surface are about as diffrent as two people can be.) Both are sarcastic, daring, independant, and loners to some extent. Like you made clear, she is not really close to her and family and tends to not have any real friends, so it makes sense they would be a connection between them.Luv Kaitx
11/1/2005 c5 1Forest-Maiden
This is a very interesting story. You're characters colenside with each other very well. I hope to see more chapters from you soon. ^^ That's all for now, keep up the goor work.
Forest-Maiden
1Forest-MaidenThis is a very interesting story. You're characters colenside with each other very well. I hope to see more chapters from you soon. ^^ That's all for now, keep up the goor work.
Forest-Maiden
10/25/2005 c5 theformatofit
so why is the necklace so important? is it a relic or is it just really expensive or does it hold personal value to the persom paying him eh? very good though update soon.
so why is the necklace so important? is it a relic or is it just really expensive or does it hold personal value to the persom paying him eh? very good though update soon.
10/10/2005 c5 15Jessie L. Star - AKA star123
There were a couple of things cleared up here although the idea that she hadn't even thought of her mobile was kind of odd. And they'd better start being a bit more normal when they go out in public (like in the diner) because otherwise people are going to get suspicious very quickly! Maybe you're trying to build up a moment when they do get caught.
Anyway, I enjoyed this chapter especially the "We're talking again?" lines. Thanks for updating.
15Jessie L. Star - AKA star123There were a couple of things cleared up here although the idea that she hadn't even thought of her mobile was kind of odd. And they'd better start being a bit more normal when they go out in public (like in the diner) because otherwise people are going to get suspicious very quickly! Maybe you're trying to build up a moment when they do get caught.
Anyway, I enjoyed this chapter especially the "We're talking again?" lines. Thanks for updating.