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6/19/2005 c1 164Black Pen
Good expression of desperation. I love the words you used - they're perfect. I especially like "pick those pieces up/keep them in your album/perhaps leave them to torch" - beautiful lines, though depressing. Good job!
4/6/2005 c1 47Kenishiro
I do get that kind of strange emotions sometimes, great poem!
3/8/2005 c1 J.E.Wyatt
Wow... Bravo!

Cheers, -Lady Notorious
3/8/2005 c1 12Rocky G
Very creative and original poem, I like the concept. Excellent work.

Rocky :)
3/8/2005 c1 acid-tears
oh, very nice. i like it =) well done

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