for minus one
6/19/2005 c1
164Black PenGood expression of desperation. I love the words you used - they're perfect. I especially like "pick those pieces up/keep them in your album/perhaps leave them to torch" - beautiful lines, though depressing. Good job!
4/6/2005 c1
47KenishiroI do get that kind of strange emotions sometimes, great poem!
3/8/2005 c1 J.E.WyattWow... Bravo!
Cheers, -Lady Notorious
3/8/2005 c1
12Rocky GVery creative and original poem, I like the concept. Excellent work.
Rocky :)
3/8/2005 c1 acid-tearsoh, very nice. i like it =) well done