for Hero8/17/2009 c1 crack the sky
oh, wow. loved this. demin, leon, and vice were all really well developed; only problem i had with it was that jenkins wasn't at all. you made it clear that he was creepy but you didn't really give ANY hints, at all, that he actually raped vice, and i think it'd have improved it a little. but besides that, i loved it, especially the last paragraph.
oh, wow. loved this. demin, leon, and vice were all really well developed; only problem i had with it was that jenkins wasn't at all. you made it clear that he was creepy but you didn't really give ANY hints, at all, that he actually raped vice, and i think it'd have improved it a little. but besides that, i loved it, especially the last paragraph.
6/29/2009 c1 gracelalia
I can only say wow. This is a hard subject to write for. You did awsome! Keep writing man. Seriously.
I can only say wow. This is a hard subject to write for. You did awsome! Keep writing man. Seriously.
12/19/2006 c1 Incognito Flamingo
Hehehe. I hope you don't mind a review almost 2 years late.
Anyway, I love this story. A bit of a touchy subject to write about.
~squiggles~
Hehehe. I hope you don't mind a review almost 2 years late.
Anyway, I love this story. A bit of a touchy subject to write about.
~squiggles~
7/29/2006 c1 
1Loriency
honestly, i'm not sure what to make of it. There wasn't much of a background to give reason to suspect that Jenkins had ever done anything, there was little character development, and the plot was just kinda...thrown in there. However, the story did flow nicely, and the situation was displayed and put out well once revealed. i'm not sure...i'm still debating if i like it. I think I do. I like it. Good job. ^_^
1Loriencyhonestly, i'm not sure what to make of it. There wasn't much of a background to give reason to suspect that Jenkins had ever done anything, there was little character development, and the plot was just kinda...thrown in there. However, the story did flow nicely, and the situation was displayed and put out well once revealed. i'm not sure...i'm still debating if i like it. I think I do. I like it. Good job. ^_^
7/9/2006 c1 7Lami
HI:) This is brilliantly written, esp. Denim, but all the charas. are realistic and easy to picture in my head, despite lack of detailed discriptions. The subject theme is touchy but you writing is o good, and the story just drew me in, Poor Vice. I love him:)
7LamiHI:) This is brilliantly written, esp. Denim, but all the charas. are realistic and easy to picture in my head, despite lack of detailed discriptions. The subject theme is touchy but you writing is o good, and the story just drew me in, Poor Vice. I love him:)
6/18/2006 c1 Natasha5
Wow. *Blinks* Just.. wow. This was so brilliantly written, so perfect and.. wow. Great write.
Wow. *Blinks* Just.. wow. This was so brilliantly written, so perfect and.. wow. Great write.
1/25/2006 c1 Kitsune Luver
This is really deep. I enjoyed it. I mean, wow, what a story. Good job. Your writing is beautiful and real.
This is really deep. I enjoyed it. I mean, wow, what a story. Good job. Your writing is beautiful and real.
10/9/2005 c1 5Yoyo-chan
Oh, this story was really good o.o Not that I thought it wouldn't be but at the beginning I wasn't quite sure where it was leading. But it ended up actually being really powerful and heart rending ^^; I hope you're still writing.
5Yoyo-chanOh, this story was really good o.o Not that I thought it wouldn't be but at the beginning I wasn't quite sure where it was leading. But it ended up actually being really powerful and heart rending ^^; I hope you're still writing.
5/21/2005 c1 Kazza2085
I think I'm going to cry... Thats such a powerful story... Its got so much drama and angst and everything. Wow...
I think I'm going to cry... Thats such a powerful story... Its got so much drama and angst and everything. Wow...
5/20/2005 c1 Pure
This was really well done. I love the life lessons in it. I like Vice the most, seeing as he has the most conscience. Also I tend to have a affinity with rape victims. Anywho, I loved it, yet I suck at reviews...
This was really well done. I love the life lessons in it. I like Vice the most, seeing as he has the most conscience. Also I tend to have a affinity with rape victims. Anywho, I loved it, yet I suck at reviews...
3/22/2005 c1 Creatress
Oh, darling, you know I love you. The minor changes are pretty good, for the most part. You've done a good job with it.
Oh, darling, you know I love you. The minor changes are pretty good, for the most part. You've done a good job with it.