2/23/2006 c1 65SarahJaneDrkAngl05
aw that is so sad. its very good too! it made me cry. keep up the good work!
~SarahJane
aw that is so sad. its very good too! it made me cry. keep up the good work!
~SarahJane
9/5/2005 c1 54H-Sea
Aww, thats so sad!
I like how you caught the flow of the poem by putting the 'if only you know i loved you' just when the mother was about to give the awful news about his death.I love how you've told it so well...
(I Have to wait 3 days till i can submit things on w.fanfiction.net :()
Aww, thats so sad!
I like how you caught the flow of the poem by putting the 'if only you know i loved you' just when the mother was about to give the awful news about his death.I love how you've told it so well...
(I Have to wait 3 days till i can submit things on w.fanfiction.net :()
3/17/2005 c1 35Koriina
Aw, that's so sad! -crycrycry- It makes me feel blue . . . :( It's very beautifully written, you used and excellent choice of words. Great work!
Aw, that's so sad! -crycrycry- It makes me feel blue . . . :( It's very beautifully written, you used and excellent choice of words. Great work!
3/13/2005 c1 Shefali
omg that is so sad! poor lil girl...*sobs*...ah well! frances es muy malo. no me gusta. espanol es muy bueno! me mucho gusta el espanol! (yeah right)
omg that is so sad! poor lil girl...*sobs*...ah well! frances es muy malo. no me gusta. espanol es muy bueno! me mucho gusta el espanol! (yeah right)
3/10/2005 c1 47xWhit3StaRx
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OMG! OMG OMG OMG! THAT'S SO FRIKEN SAD! AND OMG YOU HAVE TO STOP WRITING SO WELL! lol jk =P it's awesome i luv it ^_^
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OMG! OMG OMG OMG! THAT'S SO FRIKEN SAD! AND OMG YOU HAVE TO STOP WRITING SO WELL! lol jk =P it's awesome i luv it ^_^
-xWhit3StaRx