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1/2/2007 c1 8won smrt cukE
Hey, sorry it took me so long to get around to reading and reviewing one of your stories. This has a good start but where is it going? Is it just a chapter based on a true story or is it an actual story with a plot? There are some confusing spots, but other than that this is good. It has potential!
5/11/2005 c1 1dragonflies4ever
Hey this is really good! You've gotten a very good start for this story! I hope you update soon! I'm dying to know what happens next! And by the way, thanks for reviewing for my story!
5/3/2005 c1 IllusionKat
Aww..it's sweet..I like it!Great work
4/9/2005 c1 20Lilliana Krishante
Really nice! Can't wait to see more! You get a lot of details and it's interesting reading.
3/29/2005 c1 ChristianGeekGuy
Good start. Is there more forthcoming?

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