1/2/2007 c1 8won smrt cukE
Hey, sorry it took me so long to get around to reading and reviewing one of your stories. This has a good start but where is it going? Is it just a chapter based on a true story or is it an actual story with a plot? There are some confusing spots, but other than that this is good. It has potential!
Hey, sorry it took me so long to get around to reading and reviewing one of your stories. This has a good start but where is it going? Is it just a chapter based on a true story or is it an actual story with a plot? There are some confusing spots, but other than that this is good. It has potential!
5/11/2005 c1 1dragonflies4ever
Hey this is really good! You've gotten a very good start for this story! I hope you update soon! I'm dying to know what happens next! And by the way, thanks for reviewing for my story!
Hey this is really good! You've gotten a very good start for this story! I hope you update soon! I'm dying to know what happens next! And by the way, thanks for reviewing for my story!
5/3/2005 c1 IllusionKat
Aww..it's sweet..I like it!Great work
Aww..it's sweet..I like it!Great work
4/9/2005 c1 20Lilliana Krishante
Really nice! Can't wait to see more! You get a lot of details and it's interesting reading.
Really nice! Can't wait to see more! You get a lot of details and it's interesting reading.