for Life's Tough8/21/2006 c11 Nin Fortuna
excellent! so many of these stories have the "friends find the perfect guys too" plot-line! it's nice to see some variation!
excellent! so many of these stories have the "friends find the perfect guys too" plot-line! it's nice to see some variation!
1/27/2006 c10 
2Nin Fortuna
/he likes her, he likes her, he really really likes her/!
i really liked this, but you could elabourate just a little. like put in more details.
luv it! write the nxt chappie soon, please!
2Nin Fortuna/he likes her, he likes her, he really really likes her/!
i really liked this, but you could elabourate just a little. like put in more details.
luv it! write the nxt chappie soon, please!
1/23/2006 c10 11Riley Kathleen
oi, please do right more. Tis' interesting...kinda like my life, lol!
Anyways, I really like the style. Nice story!
~TaintedBlackTears
11Riley Kathleenoi, please do right more. Tis' interesting...kinda like my life, lol!
Anyways, I really like the style. Nice story!
~TaintedBlackTears
1/22/2006 c10 3SkateForLife
Haha I really like this story so far. It'd be cool of the chapters are longer though...but good job!
3SkateForLifeHaha I really like this story so far. It'd be cool of the chapters are longer though...but good job!
1/2/2006 c8 Nin Fortuna
m-m-more? please? -puppy eyes- hee hee
i like the idea, but i think it needs to have more detail. also something needs ot force her and Adonis toggther. then they get to like each other. but it's your story i suppose!
m-m-more? please? -puppy eyes- hee hee
i like the idea, but i think it needs to have more detail. also something needs ot force her and Adonis toggther. then they get to like each other. but it's your story i suppose!
12/22/2005 c3 katherine-kennedy
I have to say, I like this girl. She's a bit of a smart ass like me. This stories written well.
I have to say, I like this girl. She's a bit of a smart ass like me. This stories written well.
5/9/2005 c5 9rotted reverie
8:00...try waking up at 5 friggin 40. Well, it's been 6 something as of late, but still...damn it was nice in middle skool.
Walmart has my permission to burn in hell.
9rotted reverie8:00...try waking up at 5 friggin 40. Well, it's been 6 something as of late, but still...damn it was nice in middle skool.
Walmart has my permission to burn in hell.
5/9/2005 c4 rotted reverie
I had a science teacher like that in 9th grade...don't think the doode liked me but I get a friggin A. What more could I want?
I had a science teacher like that in 9th grade...don't think the doode liked me but I get a friggin A. What more could I want?
5/9/2005 c3 rotted reverie
Holy crap...this chapter made me friggin crack up which is weird cuz I've been an emo-lacious bitch as of late...but all's well.
I used to take Spanish...see cuz "Yo vivo en una casa" means "I live in a house." O...I'm that damn good.
The bonjour part totally cracked me up and then you go to Italian...nice crap...dumbasses.
Holy crap...this chapter made me friggin crack up which is weird cuz I've been an emo-lacious bitch as of late...but all's well.
I used to take Spanish...see cuz "Yo vivo en una casa" means "I live in a house." O...I'm that damn good.
The bonjour part totally cracked me up and then you go to Italian...nice crap...dumbasses.
5/7/2005 c5 5Tnayoub
I'd hate to sound redundant, but your dialogue sounds very natural for a young teenager (Susan's a teen, right?). Anyway, I'm wondering where this story is heading. When are you going to reveal that she's really a spy trying to find the hideout of the Cuban drug lord who's hiring kids to deal heroin on campus? Man, that'd be pretty sweet...
5TnayoubI'd hate to sound redundant, but your dialogue sounds very natural for a young teenager (Susan's a teen, right?). Anyway, I'm wondering where this story is heading. When are you going to reveal that she's really a spy trying to find the hideout of the Cuban drug lord who's hiring kids to deal heroin on campus? Man, that'd be pretty sweet...
3/29/2005 c1 54HomeSickLoser
i sometimes won't read anything unless it's funny. Guess what, i read it (the first chap)
54HomeSickLoseri sometimes won't read anything unless it's funny. Guess what, i read it (the first chap)