8/10/2007 c1 18Chiclets
Have I reviewed this before? I read it before, I know. Hm.
Seriously, that story packs a punch and I think the first time I read it I mentally gaped at the screen for a couple of moments when I finished it. It's just...creepy. *shudders* Ha ha... But you are a very good writer. :) Keep at it!
Have I reviewed this before? I read it before, I know. Hm.
Seriously, that story packs a punch and I think the first time I read it I mentally gaped at the screen for a couple of moments when I finished it. It's just...creepy. *shudders* Ha ha... But you are a very good writer. :) Keep at it!
5/10/2007 c1 42Baobei.13
Woa. I loved this. Its written really well, and although you know what will happen next the story keeps you wondering.
Woa. I loved this. Its written really well, and although you know what will happen next the story keeps you wondering.
5/2/2007 c1 31emptyword
How creepy. And superb. A masterful snippet of writing that keeps you wondering till the chilling last paragraphs. I thought it interesting that Larissa is so well-off (four story house?) and claims she has no friends aside from Amelia; scary to think we grow close to her, depend uneasily on her thoughts and perspective, and then realize with a jolt that not one of us are any different.
And Bob as the conscience? Cruel, sneaky author, you. I'm really hoping you have more one-shots to share!
How creepy. And superb. A masterful snippet of writing that keeps you wondering till the chilling last paragraphs. I thought it interesting that Larissa is so well-off (four story house?) and claims she has no friends aside from Amelia; scary to think we grow close to her, depend uneasily on her thoughts and perspective, and then realize with a jolt that not one of us are any different.
And Bob as the conscience? Cruel, sneaky author, you. I'm really hoping you have more one-shots to share!
4/27/2007 c1 Nihari
wow, now that is some mess right there. it was very interesting. i love your writing
wow, now that is some mess right there. it was very interesting. i love your writing
3/21/2007 c1 9hilaryjojo
I get it! Weird, I never get anything...ehm...yeah...So anyway, good story. Very original. I love originality!
I get it! Weird, I never get anything...ehm...yeah...So anyway, good story. Very original. I love originality!
8/19/2006 c1 zoule
Interesting. I think I like it...it's just I normally don't go for depressing type stories
Interesting. I think I like it...it's just I normally don't go for depressing type stories
7/25/2006 c1 emmy eleven
I don't know what is was, but something about this story just made me burst out laughing. I think it was how deceiving even words can be. Bob is pure evil and he can make people do what ever he wants by lieing. That's really, really cool and I wish I had that ability. Or, wait... Is he lieing...? Maybe he really does love them... But, then why would he make them kill themselves? I really don't know, but, anyway, something about this made me laugh.
I don't know what is was, but something about this story just made me burst out laughing. I think it was how deceiving even words can be. Bob is pure evil and he can make people do what ever he wants by lieing. That's really, really cool and I wish I had that ability. Or, wait... Is he lieing...? Maybe he really does love them... But, then why would he make them kill themselves? I really don't know, but, anyway, something about this made me laugh.
6/12/2006 c1 you're so postmodern
Thats rather...creepy. Disturbing. Brilliant. My uncle's schizephrinic. *shudders* I hope he doesnt have a Bob...thats contagious.
Thats rather...creepy. Disturbing. Brilliant. My uncle's schizephrinic. *shudders* I hope he doesnt have a Bob...thats contagious.
6/4/2006 c1 outsomniac
ive read this several times and it STILL freaks me out lolzz...but still written very well
ive read this several times and it STILL freaks me out lolzz...but still written very well