5/14/2006 c1 RedBerries
I HAD never felt so happy? Is that an indication that she lives to tell the tale? Or am I just looking into things too much?
I HAD never felt so happy? Is that an indication that she lives to tell the tale? Or am I just looking into things too much?
4/21/2006 c1 2akaCHEEKS
haha... wow... he is contagious! i loved it... so he's like a mind umm controler? wow
haha... wow... he is contagious! i loved it... so he's like a mind umm controler? wow
4/9/2006 c1 hammielurv
heyy, i LOVE THIS STORY, i read like all ur other stories and i loved them too. hm, i hope you can update quicker on The Natural Born. it's like, a really cool story and I LOVE it, so PLEASE update quicker, and sry for the cap locs. haha
heyy, i LOVE THIS STORY, i read like all ur other stories and i loved them too. hm, i hope you can update quicker on The Natural Born. it's like, a really cool story and I LOVE it, so PLEASE update quicker, and sry for the cap locs. haha
4/4/2006 c1 bittersweet suicide
VERY VERY NICE. LIKED THIS sry bout caps lock. great job. tell bob I said high
VERY VERY NICE. LIKED THIS sry bout caps lock. great job. tell bob I said high
2/9/2006 c1 ptaxnank
OMG! That was so scary... -shiver shiver- Well, I love how you trace back to the beginning. For some reason, I always like that... _ Well anyways, great story. No, wait. Not great... FANTASTIC! No, wait. Even more than fantastic! No wait. Even more! -cough cough- Okay, I think you get the point.
So... Is Bob real? -dot dot dot- Of course not! ...Right? -stare stare-
OMG! That was so scary... -shiver shiver- Well, I love how you trace back to the beginning. For some reason, I always like that... _ Well anyways, great story. No, wait. Not great... FANTASTIC! No, wait. Even more than fantastic! No wait. Even more! -cough cough- Okay, I think you get the point.
So... Is Bob real? -dot dot dot- Of course not! ...Right? -stare stare-
2/3/2006 c1 Yukino-chan
definitely a classic. hav a cookie 4 a job well done.
definitely a classic. hav a cookie 4 a job well done.
1/29/2006 c1 Angela
bob is evil... i'm so in love
bob is evil... i'm so in love
1/22/2006 c1 Natalie
Clever! absolutely brilliant! you put out a ton of amazing stories, i'm always looking for your stuff, or seeing if you update, i'm extremely impressed by your storys
Clever! absolutely brilliant! you put out a ton of amazing stories, i'm always looking for your stuff, or seeing if you update, i'm extremely impressed by your storys
1/8/2006 c1 Araceli
You know what..that really doesn't sound like skitzo..whatever it sounds kind of like the devil tempting both of them! ya know..? yeah...that's what it sounds like hehe. Cuz like both of them I guess didn't seem like happy people and then here someone is telling them that they love them and then BOOM dead cuz they commited suiside...yea..my oppinion, good ur stories are always good X= bai bai
You know what..that really doesn't sound like skitzo..whatever it sounds kind of like the devil tempting both of them! ya know..? yeah...that's what it sounds like hehe. Cuz like both of them I guess didn't seem like happy people and then here someone is telling them that they love them and then BOOM dead cuz they commited suiside...yea..my oppinion, good ur stories are always good X= bai bai
12/3/2005 c1 bleu.comme.le.ciel
oh, creepy...I adore stories about insane people ^^ Very well written.
oh, creepy...I adore stories about insane people ^^ Very well written.
11/11/2005 c1 2Mysterious Writa
Wow... Bob's like an evil curse =S Good Story! Gets people thinking lolz!
Wow... Bob's like an evil curse =S Good Story! Gets people thinking lolz!
8/17/2005 c1 1Madcow13
Interesting... Don't know how exactly you come up with stuff like this... But it is good. Maybe not realistic but it still manages to capture attention from the reader...
You could have done with a bit more with Bob and Larissa... After all, it took a while for Amelia to get killed by him, didn't it?
But anyway, doesn't really matter... This was good for a one-shot anyway.
Interesting... Don't know how exactly you come up with stuff like this... But it is good. Maybe not realistic but it still manages to capture attention from the reader...
You could have done with a bit more with Bob and Larissa... After all, it took a while for Amelia to get killed by him, didn't it?
But anyway, doesn't really matter... This was good for a one-shot anyway.