for A Good Friend Like Bob7/23/2005 c1 Jany
ok. .thsi was weird.. but good..sorry for my spelling rite now tis 2 am for me an im jus gonan finish thsi review then im gonna go sleep.. i liekd thsi story..
Jany
ok. .thsi was weird.. but good..sorry for my spelling rite now tis 2 am for me an im jus gonan finish thsi review then im gonna go sleep.. i liekd thsi story..
Jany
6/29/2005 c1 
56elven-lady22
That was certainly intriguing, but there's just one small problem with it. People with schitzophrenia don't talk to themselves. This is a myth that many people choose to believe. People who suffer from schtizaphrenia realize that the voices they hear are just voices, not real people. These voices do urge them to hurt themselves, but it's not like having a friend that stays with you all the time. The voices are violent and frightening, and when people kill themselves, it is to escape the voices. It's not always an aural stimulation either. It can be smells or visions as well. But it is still not a companion. Sorry to get all technical on you, I just wanted to make sure that you're clear on what schitzophrenia really is. Keep writing though, you're one of my favourite authors on this site!
56elven-lady22That was certainly intriguing, but there's just one small problem with it. People with schitzophrenia don't talk to themselves. This is a myth that many people choose to believe. People who suffer from schtizaphrenia realize that the voices they hear are just voices, not real people. These voices do urge them to hurt themselves, but it's not like having a friend that stays with you all the time. The voices are violent and frightening, and when people kill themselves, it is to escape the voices. It's not always an aural stimulation either. It can be smells or visions as well. But it is still not a companion. Sorry to get all technical on you, I just wanted to make sure that you're clear on what schitzophrenia really is. Keep writing though, you're one of my favourite authors on this site!
5/5/2005 c1 Neko-chan
I loved reading this! =D I tend to find stories like this really cool (yes, call me weird), and this one just made my day. ^^Weird, though... my friend used to know a schizophrenic named Bob who was "in love" with her. o_O; XD
I loved reading this! =D I tend to find stories like this really cool (yes, call me weird), and this one just made my day. ^^Weird, though... my friend used to know a schizophrenic named Bob who was "in love" with her. o_O; XD
4/28/2005 c1 1Katsumi-chan
Bob is eevviill! That is just crazy. I really don't know what to think of this. Is Bob like, real? An evil imaginary friend who likes bringing people to suicide? Or is it just a distraught friend who bring Bob to life and makes herself go through something Amelia did? I don't know what to think..except that this was just wonderful!
- Katsumi-chan
1Katsumi-chanBob is eevviill! That is just crazy. I really don't know what to think of this. Is Bob like, real? An evil imaginary friend who likes bringing people to suicide? Or is it just a distraught friend who bring Bob to life and makes herself go through something Amelia did? I don't know what to think..except that this was just wonderful!
- Katsumi-chan
4/3/2005 c1 6Girl Anachronism07
Ha, I love it. The parallelism (I think that's the word) is great. I just started grinning when Larissa responded to Bob about rather or not she loved him. Ha, that was great.
6Girl Anachronism07Ha, I love it. The parallelism (I think that's the word) is great. I just started grinning when Larissa responded to Bob about rather or not she loved him. Ha, that was great.
3/23/2005 c1 1Angelbmo
woah goodness that was good..but freaky..but still awesome lol twisted twisted twisted yet still beautifully written..ur one talented n twisted girl
1Angelbmowoah goodness that was good..but freaky..but still awesome lol twisted twisted twisted yet still beautifully written..ur one talented n twisted girl
3/21/2005 c1 Magic Marshmallow
So morbid and twisted, yet awesome. I love stories like this. Only because well I dunno... I'm not really a morbid girl myself. In fact I'm one of those hyper obnoxious girls some people just wanna stuff a sock into their mouths. Haha! Anyway, lovew this! Awesome one shot. I think you should write more one-shot stories to keep our minds busy while you update the longer ones. You really are an amazing author. =^.^= And if anyone tells you otherwise, beat int he face with a good olde stick o' Giant Pocky! That'll shut 'em up. Course... you probably don't know what Giant Pocky is.. Well buy some at Media Play! Trust me, it's like an joygasm in a stick! Wow... that really sounds wrong...
So morbid and twisted, yet awesome. I love stories like this. Only because well I dunno... I'm not really a morbid girl myself. In fact I'm one of those hyper obnoxious girls some people just wanna stuff a sock into their mouths. Haha! Anyway, lovew this! Awesome one shot. I think you should write more one-shot stories to keep our minds busy while you update the longer ones. You really are an amazing author. =^.^= And if anyone tells you otherwise, beat int he face with a good olde stick o' Giant Pocky! That'll shut 'em up. Course... you probably don't know what Giant Pocky is.. Well buy some at Media Play! Trust me, it's like an joygasm in a stick! Wow... that really sounds wrong...
3/18/2005 c1 3Sha-KayKay
hey i have a friend like bob but his name is henry-bob i share him with my best friends carla and amelia by the way henry-bob is a invisible flying leprichan. it was a good story i like the open ending.
3Sha-KayKayhey i have a friend like bob but his name is henry-bob i share him with my best friends carla and amelia by the way henry-bob is a invisible flying leprichan. it was a good story i like the open ending.
3/18/2005 c1 His Only
THAT IS FREAKY! Poor Amelia and poor Larissa. It's really interesting how you wrote this story. Gosh you are tallented! How do you come up with these story ideas? I could never! You should write a book or something.
THAT IS FREAKY! Poor Amelia and poor Larissa. It's really interesting how you wrote this story. Gosh you are tallented! How do you come up with these story ideas? I could never! You should write a book or something.
3/12/2005 c1 5aiur
omg you're such a twisted girl. lol so morbid. i don't even wanna know how you come up with all these plot lines. but they're brilliant, so i suppose you're excused. lol and you already know all your talent. i mean - geez. crazy girl. i hate you =P
anyways. this is such a cool idea. but, honestly, i don't think it's all that original. i think it's something most people consider when they're thinking about writing. or when their brain's being all twisted, hehe. but not many people can find a way to convey it to everyone else. that you've been able to DO that with every single one of your stories astounds me. and that's why you're so popular on this site. it's so different! =)
anyways i really liked the idea here. it's so intriguing. gah God knows i could never write the thriller type fic you thrive on. well except for VTV. and come on. no one's ever gonna say anything to you telling you you can't write. that's absolute BS. you're SO creative. go professional. that said, though, i think you have such a focus on plot line that sometimes you neglect the character development. now your main characters are always beautiful. they're all completely strange, and everyone can still love them. but the other characters tend to lack something, you know? but i mean - i guess it's plot first and foremost with this genre. helloo. heh. i'm picky. so with this, i'd have liked to see a lot more development. instead of this, which i pretty much expected reading it. i read the first bit, and i just knew you were gonna turn it and make her experience it, too. i feel all smart now. lol. but this is just the first chapter. and i'm not sure if this is a one-shot or not. so i don't really know what to say, lol. because i think you're gonna go on with this, but i think it's better as it is, just this one chapter. but i don't know. you think too amazingly for me to keep up. and i think the whole thing, where she meets bob and all that - i think that could have been opened way more. instead of just boom. boom. boom. in any case, no matter what i take apart, when it comes down to it, you have some of the best plot-writing on the site. and it shows with everything you write.
alright. have i talked enough? yes i think i have. *smiles* ... you make this site so interesting. anyways, thank you for looking at my fic, and thank you for the favourite nod, too. *nods head* ... that drove me crazy. really up the wall. heh. =)
~k8
5aiuromg you're such a twisted girl. lol so morbid. i don't even wanna know how you come up with all these plot lines. but they're brilliant, so i suppose you're excused. lol and you already know all your talent. i mean - geez. crazy girl. i hate you =P
anyways. this is such a cool idea. but, honestly, i don't think it's all that original. i think it's something most people consider when they're thinking about writing. or when their brain's being all twisted, hehe. but not many people can find a way to convey it to everyone else. that you've been able to DO that with every single one of your stories astounds me. and that's why you're so popular on this site. it's so different! =)
anyways i really liked the idea here. it's so intriguing. gah God knows i could never write the thriller type fic you thrive on. well except for VTV. and come on. no one's ever gonna say anything to you telling you you can't write. that's absolute BS. you're SO creative. go professional. that said, though, i think you have such a focus on plot line that sometimes you neglect the character development. now your main characters are always beautiful. they're all completely strange, and everyone can still love them. but the other characters tend to lack something, you know? but i mean - i guess it's plot first and foremost with this genre. helloo. heh. i'm picky. so with this, i'd have liked to see a lot more development. instead of this, which i pretty much expected reading it. i read the first bit, and i just knew you were gonna turn it and make her experience it, too. i feel all smart now. lol. but this is just the first chapter. and i'm not sure if this is a one-shot or not. so i don't really know what to say, lol. because i think you're gonna go on with this, but i think it's better as it is, just this one chapter. but i don't know. you think too amazingly for me to keep up. and i think the whole thing, where she meets bob and all that - i think that could have been opened way more. instead of just boom. boom. boom. in any case, no matter what i take apart, when it comes down to it, you have some of the best plot-writing on the site. and it shows with everything you write.
alright. have i talked enough? yes i think i have. *smiles* ... you make this site so interesting. anyways, thank you for looking at my fic, and thank you for the favourite nod, too. *nods head* ... that drove me crazy. really up the wall. heh. =)
~k8
3/12/2005 c1 13bipolar-magician
man. that is freaky cool, your story i mean. geez never in a bagillion years would have thought of that. it's twisted, i love it. update soon
13bipolar-magicianman. that is freaky cool, your story i mean. geez never in a bagillion years would have thought of that. it's twisted, i love it. update soon
3/11/2005 c1 5Essence of Reality
o.O
-Still in shock- Wow... okay, I need to absorb that... -takes deep breath-
That rocked. It was awesome, brilliant, creatived... insert all other words that describe an awesome plot and characters.
How do you come up with these ideas? Seriously, they rock. You should seriously publish a book- using one of the stories you finished already- like The Contract.
Seriously, I saw this one story the other day that was a FAN FICTION of the Contract. You already have people basing stories on your story. Seriously, you should be a published author.
5Essence of Realityo.O
-Still in shock- Wow... okay, I need to absorb that... -takes deep breath-
That rocked. It was awesome, brilliant, creatived... insert all other words that describe an awesome plot and characters.
How do you come up with these ideas? Seriously, they rock. You should seriously publish a book- using one of the stories you finished already- like The Contract.
Seriously, I saw this one story the other day that was a FAN FICTION of the Contract. You already have people basing stories on your story. Seriously, you should be a published author.