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b r i l l i a n t.
9/26/2007 c6 4just give me november
i really, really like this. but i hasn't been updated in two years :/
5/27/2007 c6 super happy nuclear girl
This was so disturbing.

And you wrote it beautifully, I must say. You have such a nice play on words, manipulation of imagery which is really beautiful. I loved it a lot, really.

It is so stark, but in a poetic way, if you get me. Anyway. Really, this is brilliant.
5/7/2007 c6 1one2345
Oh, this is so touching. Very well written, especially how her caring for him lead to him passing out in the kitchen, i love this, please update soon.
4/28/2007 c1 3chocolatemusic
Wow. Umm, just, wow.

You wrote it in such a way that I can see it, I can almost even understand it.

cm
11/6/2006 c6 65Aquafied
so odd.

there is a skinny boy at my education facility of the same name.

he is half a boy, so small.
11/6/2006 c5 Aquafied
dont most feeding tubes go into your throat,er, upper chestal region?
11/6/2006 c4 Aquafied
hands of a stanger.

or brother?
11/6/2006 c3 Aquafied
ticktock.
11/6/2006 c2 Aquafied
that is quite cruel but this is so intruiging
11/6/2006 c1 Aquafied
that is quite horrifying.
7/30/2006 c6 x account closed x
Wow...

I'm just in.. stunned silence, maybe even awe?

Speechless really.

Just..., wow a great job...
5/26/2006 c6 40Killing Karma
It makes me sad, because I'm in the same situation, and I fear this is the road I'm heading (all over again)..

It's good.. and real...
5/20/2006 c6 230lovelikeamixtape
it scares me how much i can relate to everything this boy is thinking. you make this so personal, so detailed, so REAL that it's almost impossible not to. amazingamazing. please keep writing.
1/21/2006 c6 Tammy
...Wow. That was chillingly amazing. The only suggestion I have is to combine some of the sections so that each chapter is longer. Other than that... The words, everything is just slightly *twisted*, reflecting Blaine's skewed thought processes. Excellent work. Is this the ending?
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