
2/17/2008 c1 n
b r i l l i a n t.
b r i l l i a n t.
9/26/2007 c6
4just give me november
i really, really like this. but i hasn't been updated in two years :/

i really, really like this. but i hasn't been updated in two years :/
5/27/2007 c6 super happy nuclear girl
This was so disturbing.
And you wrote it beautifully, I must say. You have such a nice play on words, manipulation of imagery which is really beautiful. I loved it a lot, really.
It is so stark, but in a poetic way, if you get me. Anyway. Really, this is brilliant.
This was so disturbing.
And you wrote it beautifully, I must say. You have such a nice play on words, manipulation of imagery which is really beautiful. I loved it a lot, really.
It is so stark, but in a poetic way, if you get me. Anyway. Really, this is brilliant.
5/7/2007 c6
1one2345
Oh, this is so touching. Very well written, especially how her caring for him lead to him passing out in the kitchen, i love this, please update soon.

Oh, this is so touching. Very well written, especially how her caring for him lead to him passing out in the kitchen, i love this, please update soon.
4/28/2007 c1
3chocolatemusic
Wow. Umm, just, wow.
You wrote it in such a way that I can see it, I can almost even understand it.
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Wow. Umm, just, wow.
You wrote it in such a way that I can see it, I can almost even understand it.
cm
11/6/2006 c6
65Aquafied
so odd.
there is a skinny boy at my education facility of the same name.
he is half a boy, so small.

so odd.
there is a skinny boy at my education facility of the same name.
he is half a boy, so small.
7/30/2006 c6 x account closed x
Wow...
I'm just in.. stunned silence, maybe even awe?
Speechless really.
Just..., wow a great job...
Wow...
I'm just in.. stunned silence, maybe even awe?
Speechless really.
Just..., wow a great job...
5/26/2006 c6
40Killing Karma
It makes me sad, because I'm in the same situation, and I fear this is the road I'm heading (all over again)..
It's good.. and real...

It makes me sad, because I'm in the same situation, and I fear this is the road I'm heading (all over again)..
It's good.. and real...
5/20/2006 c6
230lovelikeamixtape
it scares me how much i can relate to everything this boy is thinking. you make this so personal, so detailed, so REAL that it's almost impossible not to. amazingamazing. please keep writing.

it scares me how much i can relate to everything this boy is thinking. you make this so personal, so detailed, so REAL that it's almost impossible not to. amazingamazing. please keep writing.
1/21/2006 c6 Tammy
...Wow. That was chillingly amazing. The only suggestion I have is to combine some of the sections so that each chapter is longer. Other than that... The words, everything is just slightly *twisted*, reflecting Blaine's skewed thought processes. Excellent work. Is this the ending?
...Wow. That was chillingly amazing. The only suggestion I have is to combine some of the sections so that each chapter is longer. Other than that... The words, everything is just slightly *twisted*, reflecting Blaine's skewed thought processes. Excellent work. Is this the ending?