for Yoga6/5/2005 c1 
26pneumothorax
The 'crack' was slightly ominous. Anti-yoga? Breathe was interesting with this, as if the sufferign was over.
26pneumothoraxThe 'crack' was slightly ominous. Anti-yoga? Breathe was interesting with this, as if the sufferign was over.
4/17/2005 c2 Nobody-n-Particular
There are some errors in spelling with "ist" and "mving" but besides that, this is very nice.
There are some errors in spelling with "ist" and "mving" but besides that, this is very nice.
4/13/2005 c1 80citrus scented
hehe cute poem! I love the style used, the short words...give a instructive feel and that really gets the feel of yoga across! Nice one.
80citrus scentedhehe cute poem! I love the style used, the short words...give a instructive feel and that really gets the feel of yoga across! Nice one.
4/10/2005 c1 87youzi
Haha..not sure if this was supposed to be a humour piece..but it sure made me smile. Keep writing =D
87youziHaha..not sure if this was supposed to be a humour piece..but it sure made me smile. Keep writing =D
4/2/2005 c1 36LeseyDC
Thanks for the reviews
that was really gunny to me.
Signed, A Lost Angel In Hiding
36LeseyDCThanks for the reviews
that was really gunny to me.
Signed, A Lost Angel In Hiding
3/14/2005 c3 aknightsgoldenrose
Nice poems. Of the three I think my favorite one would have to be Yoga becuase thats what I think of when I think about yoga. Nice work.
Nice poems. Of the three I think my favorite one would have to be Yoga becuase thats what I think of when I think about yoga. Nice work.