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7/31/2005 c1 87youzi
the ending line really caught my eye.. liked how you built this piece up. keep writing =D
5/12/2005 c1 ode to a firefly
I'm feeling pretty much the same way. I'm fed up with school, teachers, and half of my friends. I just would like to sit at home all alone playing guitar for about 5 days. Maybe then return to "real life."

Overall, this is a great poem with good description. :)

~TPC~
4/23/2005 c1 8Kaywyn
you seem to know right where to repeat in this one...very very nice...and I forgot to say in nights and hallways I like the emphisis with the "and blood trickled..." just wanted top let you know that...
4/16/2005 c1 aknightsgoldenrose
Nice poem. I really liked the last line.
4/12/2005 c1 132mizu no kokoro
aw... life is but one big adventure isn't it?^^ cute poem~~

keep writing!
4/8/2005 c1 24MaskedMarionette
me likey... er... i like the flow
3/15/2005 c1 31Freddie of Albion
Very descriptive. A powerful message.Well done!

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