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3/12/2005 c1 17TrueToMyself
Aww... I like it. There are a few mistakes ("jus" instead of "just", "eyes that pierces" instead of "eyes that pierce"), but they do not affect the overall emotions in this poem. I love the rhyme in the last line (bleeding/pleading). Keep up the great writing!

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