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3/12/2005 c1 167girl- reinvented
did you accidentally publish this in story mode? other then that, this is AWESOMENESS! its powerful, and a lot of people could relate to the idea of ending coming and yet not. wanting it and not having it. lovely.
3/12/2005 c1 54Serendipitous Passage
Great poem. The ideas are golden. You might want to use seperate lines for each sentence, i.e:Where are you?The darkness of my time comes swiftly.The dark hand has come to bring me to my rest(and so forth)it helps with the meaning. Overall an excellent poem.

Please R&R some of my work. I'll return the favor.

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