for All That Glitters6/16/2005 c1 
3Ballerina with a Gun
This is so powerful...the words are twisted, confusing even, and they portray the shedding of childhood. I love it.
3Ballerina with a GunThis is so powerful...the words are twisted, confusing even, and they portray the shedding of childhood. I love it.
3/31/2005 c1 Aryanda
Wow. you capture feelings really, really, well. keep it up! :)
Wow. you capture feelings really, really, well. keep it up! :)
3/13/2005 c1 Me
Wow! This is very powerful. Good job. It sounds just like it could be written about one of my friends. I like it!
Wow! This is very powerful. Good job. It sounds just like it could be written about one of my friends. I like it!
3/13/2005 c1 24Sarah-Brighteyes
Wow...I actually loved this. I think so many of us never realize that the little girl dies in us...we try to cling onto it...but it just leaves us. Great piece. I really enjoyed reading it. I think the "poem" at the end was a very good touch. Great imagery and flow of the whole piece. Amazing write.
24Sarah-BrighteyesWow...I actually loved this. I think so many of us never realize that the little girl dies in us...we try to cling onto it...but it just leaves us. Great piece. I really enjoyed reading it. I think the "poem" at the end was a very good touch. Great imagery and flow of the whole piece. Amazing write.