for Screaming Match10/12/2005 c1 LORF
aw. how sad!
aw. how sad!
7/31/2005 c1 PoohBear99
This sounds like oen of your friends went through a hard break up and you conforted her. sweetness if a good thing to have.
This sounds like oen of your friends went through a hard break up and you conforted her. sweetness if a good thing to have.
5/18/2005 c1 Hyper Happy Peppy Little Anne
this one is so sweet it kind of sounds like a girl with her parents going though a divorce or something it is good u r getting better
this one is so sweet it kind of sounds like a girl with her parents going though a divorce or something it is good u r getting better
4/14/2005 c1 Kim
wow! I mean wow! the best poems seem more real, and this one makes me feel like i am really there, is it true?
wow! I mean wow! the best poems seem more real, and this one makes me feel like i am really there, is it true?
4/3/2005 c1 
17TrueToMyself
Aw... such emotion! How did you fit it all in? This is really good. It is a TINY bit repetitive, but still a piece of art. I like how you portrayed the two characters; I felt like I knew them for a moment.
Keep writing!
TTM
P.S. Mille grazie! A million thanks for reviewing all (every single one) of my poems! How did you find my work? Just curious...
17TrueToMyselfAw... such emotion! How did you fit it all in? This is really good. It is a TINY bit repetitive, but still a piece of art. I like how you portrayed the two characters; I felt like I knew them for a moment.
Keep writing!
TTM
P.S. Mille grazie! A million thanks for reviewing all (every single one) of my poems! How did you find my work? Just curious...