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10/12/2005 c1 LORF
i love the line: "Between the roads, between the lines"! It's great! u have talent!
7/31/2005 c1 PoohBear99
You believe in the power within thats a good thing to believe in. keep going with that.
5/18/2005 c1 Hyper Happy Peppy Little Anne
this one really sounds like u ans i love the voice you putin to it
4/14/2005 c1 Kim
i'm not following the story
4/4/2005 c1 19Leader of the Mushroom Militia
Nice, I like the way it rhymes irregularly. And the last line... I didn't quite get it and it sounds as if you came up with it just to end it nicely with a rhyming word. Apart from the ending I think it's pretty cool ^^ Greatly metaphorically put =)

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