for Until the Morning6/25/2012 c1 jedlti
Absolutely beautiful. Not many things get me to crying, but the imagery and emotion that you seemed to have written in this made totally bawl.
Absolutely beautiful. Not many things get me to crying, but the imagery and emotion that you seemed to have written in this made totally bawl.
10/21/2010 c1 
8Qryous
I don't know how you wrote it, in such a way that... I felt I could see and feel it happening.. the girl, when the realisation hits her, and written from the view point of a complete stranger.. Yes, it must be this paculiar Approach to this story that has made this so enjoyable for me. I am utterly shocked this does not have more reviews, because it deserves to.
8QryousI don't know how you wrote it, in such a way that... I felt I could see and feel it happening.. the girl, when the realisation hits her, and written from the view point of a complete stranger.. Yes, it must be this paculiar Approach to this story that has made this so enjoyable for me. I am utterly shocked this does not have more reviews, because it deserves to.
12/13/2005 c1 5Solitudity
That was such a good story! I love the Romeo Juliet type of thing fitted for the future. That was really creative! I love reading stories like this that are simple yet memorable. Great job. Never stop writing! :)
5SolitudityThat was such a good story! I love the Romeo Juliet type of thing fitted for the future. That was really creative! I love reading stories like this that are simple yet memorable. Great job. Never stop writing! :)
11/18/2005 c1 Tudi
Great short story! I love it.
Great short story! I love it.
5/20/2005 c1 175The Random Witness
Wow! this is excellent! EXCELLENT! It has great imagry; i can imagine it all, and so sad..yet gripping for it seemed to flow making it nice to read . this is a great short storie!And you wrapped it up nicely ~TRW
175The Random WitnessWow! this is excellent! EXCELLENT! It has great imagry; i can imagine it all, and so sad..yet gripping for it seemed to flow making it nice to read . this is a great short storie!And you wrapped it up nicely ~TRW
4/2/2005 c1 42Last Dance
oh my God...
That was awesome...
I'm crying now...
I don't know what to say except wow...
That was powerful.
42Last Danceoh my God...
That was awesome...
I'm crying now...
I don't know what to say except wow...
That was powerful.