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6/25/2012 c1 jedlti
Absolutely beautiful. Not many things get me to crying, but the imagery and emotion that you seemed to have written in this made totally bawl.
10/21/2010 c1 8Qryous
I don't know how you wrote it, in such a way that... I felt I could see and feel it happening.. the girl, when the realisation hits her, and written from the view point of a complete stranger.. Yes, it must be this paculiar Approach to this story that has made this so enjoyable for me. I am utterly shocked this does not have more reviews, because it deserves to.
8/4/2006 c1 zoule
Aw this was a lot better than Romeo and Juliet in my book :)
2/17/2006 c1 1Katherine Aubrey
This is so stirring! I love the way you wrote it.
12/13/2005 c1 5Solitudity
That was such a good story! I love the Romeo Juliet type of thing fitted for the future. That was really creative! I love reading stories like this that are simple yet memorable. Great job. Never stop writing! :)
11/18/2005 c1 Tudi
Great short story! I love it.
5/20/2005 c1 175The Random Witness
Wow! this is excellent! EXCELLENT! It has great imagry; i can imagine it all, and so sad..yet gripping for it seemed to flow making it nice to read . this is a great short storie!And you wrapped it up nicely ~TRW
4/2/2005 c1 42Last Dance
oh my God...

That was awesome...

I'm crying now...

I don't know what to say except wow...

That was powerful.

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