for When I'm Gone3/24/2005 c1 
7MoOkiie
I like it alot. Although there's barely any rhyming, but i like the description of how it'll be when "i'm gone". i especially like the last 4 lines.
7MoOkiieI like it alot. Although there's barely any rhyming, but i like the description of how it'll be when "i'm gone". i especially like the last 4 lines.
3/20/2005 c1 24Sarah-Brighteyes
I loved this. Beautiful and amazing. I perhaps got the meaning of God in this one. But that was my veiw. As when we loose faith we feel this sudden leaving from us...yet I think God mourns for it...anyways. Just my thoughts. I loved this. It was simply beautiful.
24Sarah-BrighteyesI loved this. Beautiful and amazing. I perhaps got the meaning of God in this one. But that was my veiw. As when we loose faith we feel this sudden leaving from us...yet I think God mourns for it...anyways. Just my thoughts. I loved this. It was simply beautiful.
3/17/2005 c1 WarriorHeart
I really liked it. I thought it was going to be one of those regular old poems about nature and their death, so when I got to the end about the friend it was a nice surprise and really made the poem good.
I really liked it. I thought it was going to be one of those regular old poems about nature and their death, so when I got to the end about the friend it was a nice surprise and really made the poem good.