for Suddenly Slowly4/5/2015 c9 new fan
I have fallen in love with this story. You must continue. YOU MUST
I have fallen in love with this story. You must continue. YOU MUST
12/5/2012 c9 tiltedHead
this story feels so real, full of emotion that isn't overly too much, nice writing
this story feels so real, full of emotion that isn't overly too much, nice writing
10/10/2012 c9 
3ColdWinter12
I usually don't write reviews, but I love your story. You transition very well between the past and the present, and this switch in time does not hinder your storytelling. It's so much fun to figure out the emotional baggage between the two characters even though you show the past. I hope you update this story soon because I want to know what happens between these two characters so badly! Please continue with your beautiful storytelling.
3ColdWinter12I usually don't write reviews, but I love your story. You transition very well between the past and the present, and this switch in time does not hinder your storytelling. It's so much fun to figure out the emotional baggage between the two characters even though you show the past. I hope you update this story soon because I want to know what happens between these two characters so badly! Please continue with your beautiful storytelling.
8/16/2012 c9 Choukou
Wowwww. This story is intense, and if you ever do decide to pick it up again, I would love to read it :)
Wowwww. This story is intense, and if you ever do decide to pick it up again, I would love to read it :)
6/18/2012 c9 zeeniya
this was amazing!
im really flummoxed due to the raw pain that coursed through me time I read this piece...
Well done!
sincerely hoping you get an update here soon.
Love.
this was amazing!
im really flummoxed due to the raw pain that coursed through me time I read this piece...
Well done!
sincerely hoping you get an update here soon.
Love.
6/17/2012 c9 spit at sanity
I love it, I love it, I love it! btw: even unedited, it never read like it was written by a sixteen year old. It is still amazing. Love the story!
I love it, I love it, I love it! btw: even unedited, it never read like it was written by a sixteen year old. It is still amazing. Love the story!
6/7/2012 c9 spit at sanity
OMG. When I read this story the first time, I loved it. I thought it was amazing and I kept checking if you were ever updating over the years. So happy that you will!
OMG. When I read this story the first time, I loved it. I thought it was amazing and I kept checking if you were ever updating over the years. So happy that you will!
5/14/2012 c9 alitalia
Hey i just wanted to tell you i'm so happy you're going to continue this! i really loved this story and i reread it every so often and wonder what you would've done with it - so now you'll do something with it and i'm sure it'll be great and probably really different from what it would've been five years ago. Glad you're back into writing!
Hey i just wanted to tell you i'm so happy you're going to continue this! i really loved this story and i reread it every so often and wonder what you would've done with it - so now you'll do something with it and i'm sure it'll be great and probably really different from what it would've been five years ago. Glad you're back into writing!
5/4/2012 c9 everelusivekudo
eeeep! Yes please! It's been so long since I read this story, but it was so interesting and I'm curious to see where you're going with it.
Please do update soon ;)
eeeep! Yes please! It's been so long since I read this story, but it was so interesting and I'm curious to see where you're going with it.
Please do update soon ;)
4/28/2012 c9 leavemeialone
Hi! I am a new reader to this story and I am super excited to see what will come. I find this story interesting. I really like how you play with the past and the present. I am interested to see how Gavin's and Halley's relationship was like. I also would like to see more of her relationship with Alex.
Hi! I am a new reader to this story and I am super excited to see what will come. I find this story interesting. I really like how you play with the past and the present. I am interested to see how Gavin's and Halley's relationship was like. I also would like to see more of her relationship with Alex.
4/26/2012 c1 1yearslater
I am so happy you're back! I've been following this story even after you stopped updating and it makes me glad Halley and Gavin's story will be told. Glad you are back and looking forward to what you have to tell! No rush at all :)
Happy writing!
1yearslaterI am so happy you're back! I've been following this story even after you stopped updating and it makes me glad Halley and Gavin's story will be told. Glad you are back and looking forward to what you have to tell! No rush at all :)
Happy writing!