for Suddenly Slowly4/16/2006 c7 MKREE
OOh I like this! You have a fresh view! Your story is complex and very real! Your time jumps are a little confusing, but I am impressed so far! Keep working!
OOh I like this! You have a fresh view! Your story is complex and very real! Your time jumps are a little confusing, but I am impressed so far! Keep working!
4/13/2006 c1 Tina
Time to update...:-D
Time to update...:-D
4/10/2006 c7 
8Bottled
God, what's wrong with Rett in this chapter... sounds like a bastard. Lol, even Gavin remembered!
8BottledGod, what's wrong with Rett in this chapter... sounds like a bastard. Lol, even Gavin remembered!
4/9/2006 c7 citrus raindrops
i forgot about this story, but im so glad i found it again. i remembered the plot, but i couldn't remember the title of this story. it was drving me crazy, but i finally found it again. lol i have trouble keeping track of all the stories i read =P i had to read things over again, but that just made me love this story more =] it's really good. update soon! i'll put this on author alert, so that i won't forget again. heh =D
i forgot about this story, but im so glad i found it again. i remembered the plot, but i couldn't remember the title of this story. it was drving me crazy, but i finally found it again. lol i have trouble keeping track of all the stories i read =P i had to read things over again, but that just made me love this story more =] it's really good. update soon! i'll put this on author alert, so that i won't forget again. heh =D
4/9/2006 c7 1DuchessYappingDog
Ah, all the drama. I haven't read these stories in a week. /Bathes in the drama-ness. Whe. I love this story so far. I was just in NYC the other day! It snowed! :D
1DuchessYappingDogAh, all the drama. I haven't read these stories in a week. /Bathes in the drama-ness. Whe. I love this story so far. I was just in NYC the other day! It snowed! :D
4/6/2006 c7 4That Girl You Love
Holy crap.
That was amazing.
Really, really amazing.
It's so rare for me to find a story that I will actually read past the first couple of paragraphs, and when I do find one, I become a rapid fan.
I loved how...real it was. Gritty. I loved the portrayals of the characters, and I love the style with which you are writing.
I'm ecstatic you are choosing to continue this. I'm advertising you in my next update, as well. We need to get the word out!
Again, I lovedlovedloved this.
Keep up the amazing work. I'm expecting many an update out of you, missy.
4That Girl You LoveHoly crap.
That was amazing.
Really, really amazing.
It's so rare for me to find a story that I will actually read past the first couple of paragraphs, and when I do find one, I become a rapid fan.
I loved how...real it was. Gritty. I loved the portrayals of the characters, and I love the style with which you are writing.
I'm ecstatic you are choosing to continue this. I'm advertising you in my next update, as well. We need to get the word out!
Again, I lovedlovedloved this.
Keep up the amazing work. I'm expecting many an update out of you, missy.
4/6/2006 c7 Jamiesbond
too cute! i love it! i just got done reading the whole thing instead of doing homework. i have calc and a research paper to write... gosh! anyway great story. at times i find it hard to follow all the jumping but i really enjoy it and i am looking forward to more.
too cute! i love it! i just got done reading the whole thing instead of doing homework. i have calc and a research paper to write... gosh! anyway great story. at times i find it hard to follow all the jumping but i really enjoy it and i am looking forward to more.
4/6/2006 c7 7Unbirthday
Ah, this love-hate relationship between Halley and Gavin is nearly suffocating and I still love it, for some odd reason. And this style of using flashbacks interweaved in the present keeps things lively as I learn more about the characters. I really like this story. I can't wait for the next installment! =)
7UnbirthdayAh, this love-hate relationship between Halley and Gavin is nearly suffocating and I still love it, for some odd reason. And this style of using flashbacks interweaved in the present keeps things lively as I learn more about the characters. I really like this story. I can't wait for the next installment! =)
4/6/2006 c7 1storys
I really honestly seriously totally loved this story. I read the whole story in a day, and I can almost bet that my eyes are turning bad. Update soon! Looking forward to the next chapter, but I have a question. Is "Happy Fucking Birthday" supposed to be good? It doesn't sound very polite. lol. Anyways, update.
1storysI really honestly seriously totally loved this story. I read the whole story in a day, and I can almost bet that my eyes are turning bad. Update soon! Looking forward to the next chapter, but I have a question. Is "Happy Fucking Birthday" supposed to be good? It doesn't sound very polite. lol. Anyways, update.
4/5/2006 c7 1mudonthetires
This story is really interesting...I'm liking it! I've noticed a few grammar and punctuation errors, but not enough to make me not want to read this. Plus, the chapters are short compared to what I normally like to read on FP, but you more than compensate with the description and FEELINGS and just overall reality and awesomeness of the characters.
1mudonthetiresThis story is really interesting...I'm liking it! I've noticed a few grammar and punctuation errors, but not enough to make me not want to read this. Plus, the chapters are short compared to what I normally like to read on FP, but you more than compensate with the description and FEELINGS and just overall reality and awesomeness of the characters.
4/5/2006 c7 playgroundunited
kayso. this is really really good. i mean it. i like how you play the past and the present together and somehow the stories just seem unrelated but mesh well anyway. it's really good. kudos for that.
there are some typos, and some wrong words? as in i think you wanted another words but didn't know how to spell it or something? like you used interoperated(i can't remember which chapter) when i think the word you wanted was "interpreted" XD
but yeah. update soon! i'm looking forward to it
kayso. this is really really good. i mean it. i like how you play the past and the present together and somehow the stories just seem unrelated but mesh well anyway. it's really good. kudos for that.
there are some typos, and some wrong words? as in i think you wanted another words but didn't know how to spell it or something? like you used interoperated(i can't remember which chapter) when i think the word you wanted was "interpreted" XD
but yeah. update soon! i'm looking forward to it
4/5/2006 c7 mazee
ah, another fantastic chapter. i can't wait to see how gavin and halley ever got civil with each other :)
ah, another fantastic chapter. i can't wait to see how gavin and halley ever got civil with each other :)