for Suddenly Slowly5/20/2009 c9 A Little Taste Of Heaven
I can't describe how...addictingly intense this story is. Every chapter, every word, everything fits together so well, I can't imagine Gavin's and Halley's story being told any other way, cuz the way you have been telling it is perfect.
It will be amazing if you finished this story, but for some reason, I felt the last chapter was an ending in and of itself. It allows the reader to imagine his or her idea of a perfect ending.
I can't describe how...addictingly intense this story is. Every chapter, every word, everything fits together so well, I can't imagine Gavin's and Halley's story being told any other way, cuz the way you have been telling it is perfect.
It will be amazing if you finished this story, but for some reason, I felt the last chapter was an ending in and of itself. It allows the reader to imagine his or her idea of a perfect ending.
5/18/2009 c9 
1crazylady4
Damn I really liked this story i seriously wish you hadn't stopped it. i hope you can maybe start to write it again cause i has so much potential!
1crazylady4Damn I really liked this story i seriously wish you hadn't stopped it. i hope you can maybe start to write it again cause i has so much potential!
5/9/2009 c9 9Stahlut
I just read this story, and I really like it. And I do pray that one day you get the urge to write it again.
9StahlutI just read this story, and I really like it. And I do pray that one day you get the urge to write it again.
1/12/2009 c9 LondonLi
I just wanted to encourage you to finish this; you've got a good story going here and I would love to read more!
I just wanted to encourage you to finish this; you've got a good story going here and I would love to read more!
12/31/2008 c9 3Emilia Burgandy
Ok... This really isn't a remotley sad story, is it? I don't think so. But I've been crying since chapter six... This really is an amazing story... You've created this cliche, and you've morphed it into something new and unique, and something that readers actually want to read... And I just hope that you continue it soon...
3Emilia BurgandyOk... This really isn't a remotley sad story, is it? I don't think so. But I've been crying since chapter six... This really is an amazing story... You've created this cliche, and you've morphed it into something new and unique, and something that readers actually want to read... And I just hope that you continue it soon...
12/22/2008 c9 smilesforluck
OMG I love your story! It's amazingly written, awesome plot, awesome characters. I can actually see the thing happening in my head. Please get over the writers block soon because I want to read more! Hopefully you'll be able to update soon! :)
OMG I love your story! It's amazingly written, awesome plot, awesome characters. I can actually see the thing happening in my head. Please get over the writers block soon because I want to read more! Hopefully you'll be able to update soon! :)
12/16/2008 c8 2righthere431
ah at least they have to have closure but I don't think that'll happen...and if they hate each other that much... arghh I just want the two of them to get along
2righthere431ah at least they have to have closure but I don't think that'll happen...and if they hate each other that much... arghh I just want the two of them to get along
12/16/2008 c6 righthere431
ahaha I love it when girls punch guys in the face... not to sound violent or anything... it's just funny... I wonder how they came to be lovers if they hated each other's guts
ahaha I love it when girls punch guys in the face... not to sound violent or anything... it's just funny... I wonder how they came to be lovers if they hated each other's guts
12/16/2008 c1 righthere431
so is that why they stopped talking? because she didn't take him seriously or no?
so is that why they stopped talking? because she didn't take him seriously or no?