for Suddenly Slowly11/19/2008 c9 
1penpending
Interesting and intriguingg...
I really like this story. I hope you'll update soon. If not, I totally understand. I often have "writer's block" myself. XD
1penpendingInteresting and intriguingg...
I really like this story. I hope you'll update soon. If not, I totally understand. I often have "writer's block" myself. XD
9/8/2008 c1 Lilliie
Hi !
I'm french and I just love to read story in english but I had a hard time finding a good one until i read yours. This is an amazing story and i hope that you'll update soon !
Hi !
I'm french and I just love to read story in english but I had a hard time finding a good one until i read yours. This is an amazing story and i hope that you'll update soon !
8/13/2008 c9 alice
omg so i just really have to say this. wow. seriously this story is really something. it was incredible! i mean i just discovered this site in mid june and i've been incredibly addicted, but seriously for the past few days i've been trying to find a good story to read, but i seriously couldn't find ANYTHING. gawd, there are so many stories that are cliched now aren't they? and sometimes i only find a few that i realy really honestly like and where the writing doesn't make me cringe and where it doesn't make me feel incredibly guilty for reading it. haha but ya i really don't know, but something about this story seriously seriously gets to me. i mean, if you think about it this story could kinda be considered cliche couldn't it? BUT i truly think that you took a hackneyed concept and seriously made it so unique and your own. and i respect you for that. almost everything people write about these days could be considered cliche and i get so freakin tired of reading them even though i inevitably do eventually read them. LOL. and OMFREAKINGOSH your writing is really realy good! i mean, i know its not perfect but i honestly can't really say how you could improve your writing...haha sorry that i wasn't much help! :D but ya anyway, goshes, i really don't know. this story really touched me in a way that i really don't understand so ya i can't really explain it. LOL. just know that you've done a good job with this story and i swear, i WILL be waiting for you to finsih it. i know you probably get this a lot, but PLEASE PLEASE finish it. but anyway, if you never do go back to this project, all i can say that the story is already pretty amazing as it is. :P
omg so i just really have to say this. wow. seriously this story is really something. it was incredible! i mean i just discovered this site in mid june and i've been incredibly addicted, but seriously for the past few days i've been trying to find a good story to read, but i seriously couldn't find ANYTHING. gawd, there are so many stories that are cliched now aren't they? and sometimes i only find a few that i realy really honestly like and where the writing doesn't make me cringe and where it doesn't make me feel incredibly guilty for reading it. haha but ya i really don't know, but something about this story seriously seriously gets to me. i mean, if you think about it this story could kinda be considered cliche couldn't it? BUT i truly think that you took a hackneyed concept and seriously made it so unique and your own. and i respect you for that. almost everything people write about these days could be considered cliche and i get so freakin tired of reading them even though i inevitably do eventually read them. LOL. and OMFREAKINGOSH your writing is really realy good! i mean, i know its not perfect but i honestly can't really say how you could improve your writing...haha sorry that i wasn't much help! :D but ya anyway, goshes, i really don't know. this story really touched me in a way that i really don't understand so ya i can't really explain it. LOL. just know that you've done a good job with this story and i swear, i WILL be waiting for you to finsih it. i know you probably get this a lot, but PLEASE PLEASE finish it. but anyway, if you never do go back to this project, all i can say that the story is already pretty amazing as it is. :P
7/23/2008 c9 1Secret-Lives
Awe, I just found this story and loving it... Just wanted to drop a line letting you know that you have one fan out there willing you to continue.
1Secret-LivesAwe, I just found this story and loving it... Just wanted to drop a line letting you know that you have one fan out there willing you to continue.
6/12/2008 c9 arreyn emme
love the story! great characterization. I love the tension between halley and gavin and all of the sort of problems they have. Please continue!
love the story! great characterization. I love the tension between halley and gavin and all of the sort of problems they have. Please continue!
5/15/2008 c9 rainbabie
:( You haven't updated in almost a year. Hopefully you will get inspired soon.
I really want to know how they got together. How she and Rhett broke up and how she's going to leave her fiance and end up happily ever after with Gavin. *wink wink, nudge nudge*
:( You haven't updated in almost a year. Hopefully you will get inspired soon.
I really want to know how they got together. How she and Rhett broke up and how she's going to leave her fiance and end up happily ever after with Gavin. *wink wink, nudge nudge*
5/15/2008 c8 rainbabie
WOW, that never even entered my though process while reading the past chapters. Her being pregnant and having an abortion really threw me in a loop!
WOW, that never even entered my though process while reading the past chapters. Her being pregnant and having an abortion really threw me in a loop!
5/15/2008 c7 rainbabie
Oh my.. Poor Halley!
BTW, I love the name Gavin and am in love with him!
Is Halley pronounced like Hail-ley?
Oh my.. Poor Halley!
BTW, I love the name Gavin and am in love with him!
Is Halley pronounced like Hail-ley?
5/15/2008 c6 rainbabie
I love this rule: I could never sleep with a guy until I memorized his phone number.
I love this rule: I could never sleep with a guy until I memorized his phone number.
4/27/2008 c9 Jay827
oh damn. this sucks. but i will be waiting for an update. no matter how long that may be.
ttfn.
oh damn. this sucks. but i will be waiting for an update. no matter how long that may be.
ttfn.
2/2/2008 c9 7Randomisation
if you do get inspiration then id love to read the rest :D really great writing!
7Randomisationif you do get inspiration then id love to read the rest :D really great writing!