for Midnight3/16/2005 c1 
27HuRt-AnD-Al0nE
your writing is so... contrived. When you rhyme, don't make it sound so forced.
27HuRt-AnD-Al0nEyour writing is so... contrived. When you rhyme, don't make it sound so forced.
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