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10/12/2005 c1 LORF
amen!
7/31/2005 c1 PoohBear99
This really gives the reader a insight to what you think of summer. thats a good writing quality dont loose it.
4/14/2005 c1 Kim
although it is a happy poem, i would have to say that it isn't one of your better ones
4/4/2005 c1 3somefreakylooknchick
and I can't wait for it! 35 days left!sorry..yeah it's kinda difficult for me to write happy..

thanx for reviews.in Mirror, Mirror..there was a vampire behind her.
4/2/2005 c1 54Serendipitous Passage
I have trouble writing happy poems. This is well done. It seems a little forced and lacks the flow of some of your other writing, but it is good none the less. Keep up the good work.

Please R&R some of my work. I'll return the favor.
3/17/2005 c1 16Wing Chant
Darn right Summer means happiness! ^_^ Lol. I thought the descriptions met the feelings of that season well. =D Yay for you!

loserz. ;)
3/16/2005 c1 12Rocky G
Wow, excellent poem! I like the one word description for summer, very nice. I enjoyed reading your poem.

Rocky :)
3/16/2005 c1 28TheAngelofhope
Yea, writing about happy things isnt always that easy to do. However you did a good job on this. :)

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