for Actress in the Mirror7/8/2005 c1 Shima And Tempis
It's dark, but making it rhyme makes it more of dark humor. I like it though. Well written.-SAT
It's dark, but making it rhyme makes it more of dark humor. I like it though. Well written.-SAT
6/22/2005 c1 
79miss lavender
I liked the repeated "End End End", at the.. well.. end! (Ha, what a funny girl I am *dies*), but, it was a very-well-written piece. I take it about suicide, yet, interpert it as you will! Nonetheless, it was very good.
-Lavvy
79miss lavenderI liked the repeated "End End End", at the.. well.. end! (Ha, what a funny girl I am *dies*), but, it was a very-well-written piece. I take it about suicide, yet, interpert it as you will! Nonetheless, it was very good.
-Lavvy
5/17/2005 c1 270dustytiger
great peice, i really like it a lot, keep up the good work thank you for sharing and thank you for the review
270dustytigergreat peice, i really like it a lot, keep up the good work thank you for sharing and thank you for the review
3/21/2005 c1 roselilie
Nice poem. I love the morbidness its made with. Great poem. Keep it up!
Nice poem. I love the morbidness its made with. Great poem. Keep it up!