for Stupid4/9/2005 c6 books4me
Hey,
Fun new chapters!
The whole keys-in-bra incident must have been quite embarassing. I would never have thought up something like that!
Keep up the great work,
* Books4mE *
Hey,
Fun new chapters!
The whole keys-in-bra incident must have been quite embarassing. I would never have thought up something like that!
Keep up the great work,
* Books4mE *
4/7/2005 c6 
3Devious Feline
Absolutely AWESOME, as usual. You sure have a way of making people laugh, my dear. Love it and update soon!
3Devious FelineAbsolutely AWESOME, as usual. You sure have a way of making people laugh, my dear. Love it and update soon!
3/24/2005 c4 Daisy Decamps
Aw man! A disappointing ending to a promising day. Even though what Darren said WAS really wrong and everything. This story's going interestingly. Um, just one thing, I think you should describe more the ppl surrounding Darren and Ameli to give the readers a look at their "social status".
Aw man! A disappointing ending to a promising day. Even though what Darren said WAS really wrong and everything. This story's going interestingly. Um, just one thing, I think you should describe more the ppl surrounding Darren and Ameli to give the readers a look at their "social status".
3/21/2005 c3 3Devious Feline
JeffJobSucak. Haha! I nearly fell off the couch I was laughing so hard. Update soon!
3Devious FelineJeffJobSucak. Haha! I nearly fell off the couch I was laughing so hard. Update soon!
3/18/2005 c3 Daisy Decamps
Once again, TOO SHORT. UPDATE MORE But no pressure. hehe. Otherwise, great job.
Once again, TOO SHORT. UPDATE MORE But no pressure. hehe. Otherwise, great job.
3/18/2005 c2 Daisy Decamps
This chapter was kinda short, but I really liked it. And the thing is, I feel THE SAME way about this guy that the narrator (sorry, forgot her name) feels about this guy. God. Don't you just HATE that feeling!
This chapter was kinda short, but I really liked it. And the thing is, I feel THE SAME way about this guy that the narrator (sorry, forgot her name) feels about this guy. God. Don't you just HATE that feeling!
3/18/2005 c3 books4me
Hi,
Thanks for the two new chappies!
I'm enjoying your story, though I'm not 100% sure about everything. A few more details might help.
I look forward to reading more,
* Books4mE *
Hi,
Thanks for the two new chappies!
I'm enjoying your story, though I'm not 100% sure about everything. A few more details might help.
I look forward to reading more,
* Books4mE *
3/18/2005 c3 gonnabefamous
Not bad, although it kinda is confusing to read.
Hurry and write the next one though.!Azizati
Not bad, although it kinda is confusing to read.
Hurry and write the next one though.!Azizati
3/18/2005 c3 4rightblinkleft
ahahahha her mom thinks shes crazy dats funny the bob thing... hahaahupdate soon
4rightblinkleftahahahha her mom thinks shes crazy dats funny the bob thing... hahaahupdate soon
3/17/2005 c1 books4me
Hey,
Interesting first chapter.
I'd be interested in reading more.
It sounds like it could trun into something pretty neat.
Thanks and keep up the good work!
* Books4mE *
Hey,
Interesting first chapter.
I'd be interested in reading more.
It sounds like it could trun into something pretty neat.
Thanks and keep up the good work!
* Books4mE *
3/17/2005 c1 Daisy Decamps
Oh. Interesting first chapter. I love the situation you put the characters in, and I like the sarcasm/wittiness of the narrator. Plz continue it.
Oh. Interesting first chapter. I love the situation you put the characters in, and I like the sarcasm/wittiness of the narrator. Plz continue it.