for Breathing6/17/2007 c1 
7Chihero
The one thing I love about this is that it rhymes AND makes sense (a skill many songwriters could use). It was very nice, in a depressing, woe-is-me kind of way... I'd kill to be able to write poetry like that. You got talent, babe (...unless you're a guy, which I suppose you could be, but I've never seen guys write poetry like that... but just in case you are, then, you got talent, DUDE.) ;D
7ChiheroThe one thing I love about this is that it rhymes AND makes sense (a skill many songwriters could use). It was very nice, in a depressing, woe-is-me kind of way... I'd kill to be able to write poetry like that. You got talent, babe (...unless you're a guy, which I suppose you could be, but I've never seen guys write poetry like that... but just in case you are, then, you got talent, DUDE.) ;D
4/22/2005 c1 112ShadowofDemise
Wow, this is wonderful! You are a great poet! (I read some of your others), the way you rhyme is very skillful indeed.
112ShadowofDemiseWow, this is wonderful! You are a great poet! (I read some of your others), the way you rhyme is very skillful indeed.
4/3/2005 c1 13Hidden Dragon Song
That was very moving and the way it is written really makes me feel it. Well done.
13Hidden Dragon SongThat was very moving and the way it is written really makes me feel it. Well done.
4/3/2005 c1 newgurl
whjoa.. very good.. i love how the poem just flows.. it has a nice flow.. very good.. good job!:)
whjoa.. very good.. i love how the poem just flows.. it has a nice flow.. very good.. good job!:)