
5/27/2005 c1
29Halfaway
I apologize it took so long to get back to you. This one makes me think it was worth the wait.

I apologize it took so long to get back to you. This one makes me think it was worth the wait.
3/30/2005 c1 clairvaux
How sweet. I like the way you describe the persona's emotions. Beautiful.
^ Thanks for the review on Army of Angels
How sweet. I like the way you describe the persona's emotions. Beautiful.
^ Thanks for the review on Army of Angels
3/29/2005 c1
40Deavon Brooks
I love this! it's soo romantic, yet sad. Kind of reminds me of Jane Eyre. I love all the metaphors: cuffed wrist, chained heart. This is really wonderful. It's how I want to write, it's the message that i always want to portray in my poems, but I never seem to be able to accomplish what you can. Truly beautiful! Thanks for the review!

I love this! it's soo romantic, yet sad. Kind of reminds me of Jane Eyre. I love all the metaphors: cuffed wrist, chained heart. This is really wonderful. It's how I want to write, it's the message that i always want to portray in my poems, but I never seem to be able to accomplish what you can. Truly beautiful! Thanks for the review!
3/29/2005 c1
31The Love Demi Goddess
(thanks for reviewing mine btw)
I liked it. I LOVED the ending, definatly VERY VEYR VERY VERY poetic. I guess I'll have to look at the picture to give you full detail, but maybe discribe the one in the picture more. Just to give it that extra flare. I like it how it is now though as well.
The Love Demi Goddess

(thanks for reviewing mine btw)
I liked it. I LOVED the ending, definatly VERY VEYR VERY VERY poetic. I guess I'll have to look at the picture to give you full detail, but maybe discribe the one in the picture more. Just to give it that extra flare. I like it how it is now though as well.
The Love Demi Goddess
3/26/2005 c1
67astral boy
sweet poem, i realy liked it. it was short and beautiful, tangles up beauty with darkness. I'll have to check out that picture. Thanks for the reviews too. :)

sweet poem, i realy liked it. it was short and beautiful, tangles up beauty with darkness. I'll have to check out that picture. Thanks for the reviews too. :)