for His Eyes10/18/2007 c19 Amber Salgado
this story is truly the best story ive read on fictionpress the meaning is deep and yet it still made me laugh i can truthfully say "when are you gonna make a sequel?" i hope their is one
-Amber
this story is truly the best story ive read on fictionpress the meaning is deep and yet it still made me laugh i can truthfully say "when are you gonna make a sequel?" i hope their is one
-Amber
10/16/2007 c19 
4SecondHandSonata
Haha, I'm going to be one of those weekly reveiwers that reminds you about that AMAZING story you wrote over two years ago.
I must admit, I'm quite impress you'res still on FP after five years.
In any case, the story is pretty darn good. It gets a bit jumpy and bipolar and unexplained in places but for the most part, it's pretty darn awesome.
THANK YOU for not giving Tristan his sight back.
THANK YOU for not making some fluffy couply scene involving Tristan and Amy riding off into the sunset together.
And THANK YOU so much for pushing all the limits with Amy. So many charecters in FP stories act badass and then act like angels. But Amy was the real deal. She wasn't afraid to dump bitches on the side of the highway.
So anyways.
Fantastic story, congratulations.
4SecondHandSonataHaha, I'm going to be one of those weekly reveiwers that reminds you about that AMAZING story you wrote over two years ago.
I must admit, I'm quite impress you'res still on FP after five years.
In any case, the story is pretty darn good. It gets a bit jumpy and bipolar and unexplained in places but for the most part, it's pretty darn awesome.
THANK YOU for not giving Tristan his sight back.
THANK YOU for not making some fluffy couply scene involving Tristan and Amy riding off into the sunset together.
And THANK YOU so much for pushing all the limits with Amy. So many charecters in FP stories act badass and then act like angels. But Amy was the real deal. She wasn't afraid to dump bitches on the side of the highway.
So anyways.
Fantastic story, congratulations.
10/14/2007 c19 PhishPond
i didnt read this til you were done with it but i absolutely loved it and decided to show my appreciation =]
i didnt read this til you were done with it but i absolutely loved it and decided to show my appreciation =]
10/11/2007 c19 MoriMorte
when you get it published PLEASE SEND ME A cOPY AnD SiGN IT!
MAN THT IS so AWESOME
A Dark White Rose
when you get it published PLEASE SEND ME A cOPY AnD SiGN IT!
MAN THT IS so AWESOME
A Dark White Rose
10/9/2007 c18 2crystaldreams611
I think you do deserve a lengthy review from me after all the hard work
A true pleasure to read, seeing that i've been at it non-stop all in one go
its a bit more descriptive than most other stories ive read (cos i can't stand chunks) but in a good way.
Would've liked to see a less-rushed ending tho...still it was touching
I agree about leaving tristian blind, it was the essence of the story & what makes it addictively romantic.
hehe whilst reading this i kept analysing ur story, like the sybolism & metaphors (that's too much english for u) & actually i haven't come across a story quite deep and worthy of sympathy as urs.
Keep up the good work!
2crystaldreams611I think you do deserve a lengthy review from me after all the hard work
A true pleasure to read, seeing that i've been at it non-stop all in one go
its a bit more descriptive than most other stories ive read (cos i can't stand chunks) but in a good way.
Would've liked to see a less-rushed ending tho...still it was touching
I agree about leaving tristian blind, it was the essence of the story & what makes it addictively romantic.
hehe whilst reading this i kept analysing ur story, like the sybolism & metaphors (that's too much english for u) & actually i haven't come across a story quite deep and worthy of sympathy as urs.
Keep up the good work!
9/30/2007 c19 10thinkTwice Nfall
I truly liked your idea, and I thought the romance was extremely sweet. I just think you should have worked on the detail. Without much detail, I felt like the story wasn't exactly realistic, and some parts also didn't make sense. So the story could've done much better, but it it was still pretty good.
10thinkTwice NfallI truly liked your idea, and I thought the romance was extremely sweet. I just think you should have worked on the detail. Without much detail, I felt like the story wasn't exactly realistic, and some parts also didn't make sense. So the story could've done much better, but it it was still pretty good.