for His Eyes8/23/2007 c19 
5HelloLovely
Hey! My name is Becca. I have to say that this story was so good. If you get it published, I would definitely like to know. Thank you so very much. my email is :
5HelloLovelyHey! My name is Becca. I have to say that this story was so good. If you get it published, I would definitely like to know. Thank you so very much. my email is :
8/11/2007 c18 Michelle Habibi
heyy! ive read some of your previous stories and thats how i got to this one. and i loved it! i dont think the whole riding blind is too farfetched because the whole thing isn't really about being able to see, more your timing and the trust between the horse and the rider. ive never read a plot like this one, its so original and good luck with publishing! please drop me an email at if anything happens!
heyy! ive read some of your previous stories and thats how i got to this one. and i loved it! i dont think the whole riding blind is too farfetched because the whole thing isn't really about being able to see, more your timing and the trust between the horse and the rider. ive never read a plot like this one, its so original and good luck with publishing! please drop me an email at if anything happens!
8/8/2007 c19 2The Shadows' Sunrise
I love it! It makes you think that nothing is impossible, yet nothing is what it seems either. :) I hope you don't mind if I put it under 'favorite stories'. ;)
shadows' sunrise
2The Shadows' SunriseI love it! It makes you think that nothing is impossible, yet nothing is what it seems either. :) I hope you don't mind if I put it under 'favorite stories'. ;)
shadows' sunrise
8/7/2007 c18 Chryseida
Hey; I just voted for this on the SKoW awards. I don't usually do that sort of thing... so, here's why:
This is one of the most inspiring stories I've ever read. You have a great plot, well-developed characters, a likeable narrator, and the little things that you've added that make it such a wonderful read. I loved the scene where she tells him where to go on the horse - and that part about his eyes was absolutely beautiful.
Thank you thank you THANK YOU for writing this and posting it here. It's one of those stories that you read and it makes you smile, and it gives you a message that you actually remember. You deserve to win your contest! And if you publish this, I'll definitely buy it.
Thank you again,
Lucis
Hey; I just voted for this on the SKoW awards. I don't usually do that sort of thing... so, here's why:
This is one of the most inspiring stories I've ever read. You have a great plot, well-developed characters, a likeable narrator, and the little things that you've added that make it such a wonderful read. I loved the scene where she tells him where to go on the horse - and that part about his eyes was absolutely beautiful.
Thank you thank you THANK YOU for writing this and posting it here. It's one of those stories that you read and it makes you smile, and it gives you a message that you actually remember. You deserve to win your contest! And if you publish this, I'll definitely buy it.
Thank you again,
Lucis
8/5/2007 c19 Out
such a great story.
i love how you ended it
such a great story.
i love how you ended it
8/4/2007 c18 CanesFanCatty
Wow, this story was so good. I really loved it, and I wish there was more! It was very sweet, and I loved the way you wrote it!
:D
Wow, this story was so good. I really loved it, and I wish there was more! It was very sweet, and I loved the way you wrote it!
:D
8/1/2007 c19 B
This is definetly not the kind story that I usually read, (at first glance it's a little bit too after-school-special for me, you have to read on to get interested) but I'm really glad I read it. It's a great story.
I read your authors note and I want you to know that I think you could probably get the current copy published-it's a lot better than most of the crap they print these days anyways. Oh, and I voted for you in the SKoWs. I hope you win.
Great story. Bye.
B
This is definetly not the kind story that I usually read, (at first glance it's a little bit too after-school-special for me, you have to read on to get interested) but I'm really glad I read it. It's a great story.
I read your authors note and I want you to know that I think you could probably get the current copy published-it's a lot better than most of the crap they print these days anyways. Oh, and I voted for you in the SKoWs. I hope you win.
Great story. Bye.
B
7/30/2007 c19 2Jae 9
Congrats...I read this story when you were first posting it and i absolutely loved it! i just reread it and its better then i remembered. Good luck with the publication!
2Jae 9Congrats...I read this story when you were first posting it and i absolutely loved it! i just reread it and its better then i remembered. Good luck with the publication!
7/29/2007 c9 evilangel12345
i love this story so far great job and keep writing i really want to know how things fgo heehe bye
i love this story so far great job and keep writing i really want to know how things fgo heehe bye
7/28/2007 c19 Pop the Bubble
heyy
great story!
it was really touching
yeah you really should try and get this published. its awesome =]
xbubble
heyy
great story!
it was really touching
yeah you really should try and get this published. its awesome =]
xbubble
7/28/2007 c18 5christinaxxyo
I think I fell in love with this story. I loved how you showed how disabilities are what you make of it and how Tristan can still fulfill his dreams even though something came in his path.
5christinaxxyoI think I fell in love with this story. I loved how you showed how disabilities are what you make of it and how Tristan can still fulfill his dreams even though something came in his path.
7/28/2007 c16 christinaxxyo
That was kinda weird, how the valedictorian drugged her.. but I guess it's reality.. I guess..
That was kinda weird, how the valedictorian drugged her.. but I guess it's reality.. I guess..