for His Eyes5/7/2007 c7 twyx
Umm - cold you PM me - coz i dont understand the charlie dinner thing... But great work!
Umm - cold you PM me - coz i dont understand the charlie dinner thing... But great work!
5/7/2007 c18 
1UniquelyNeverSeen
i loved it :) and i like how you kept him blind it just wouldn't be the same if he became "perfect" again... m Jane Eyre... very good movie :)
1UniquelyNeverSeeni loved it :) and i like how you kept him blind it just wouldn't be the same if he became "perfect" again... m Jane Eyre... very good movie :)
5/4/2007 c17 Kythia
No matter how many times I read this story, I always love it!
Congratualtions on writing this amazing piece. I hope that someday you will able to get some things published so that I can have your work on my bookshelves. :)
No matter how many times I read this story, I always love it!
Congratualtions on writing this amazing piece. I hope that someday you will able to get some things published so that I can have your work on my bookshelves. :)
4/27/2007 c18 Rebelistic
Hey! I just read your story, and it's fan-tas-tic! Your an awesome writer, keep it up!
Hey! I just read your story, and it's fan-tas-tic! Your an awesome writer, keep it up!
4/24/2007 c18 sierra
oh gosh,
i wish i could write as well as you. i mean, i do have several stories under my belt, but i'm stuck for ideas. argh. writer's block can be plenty frustrating. his eyes rocks. i'm saving this in favorites. haha.
continue writing!
sierra.
oh gosh,
i wish i could write as well as you. i mean, i do have several stories under my belt, but i'm stuck for ideas. argh. writer's block can be plenty frustrating. his eyes rocks. i'm saving this in favorites. haha.
continue writing!
sierra.
4/21/2007 c1 bittersweet nostalgia
I love this story. It was so, wow. Though it was a little fast paced, it was believable.
You could make a movie of it:|
not kidding.
I love this story. It was so, wow. Though it was a little fast paced, it was believable.
You could make a movie of it:|
not kidding.
4/19/2007 c18 3PhotographanAngel
Oh my gosh.
That was AMAZING!
and for the thingy where we leave our emails, mines
Omgosh though.
That was.. awesome :D
3PhotographanAngelOh my gosh.
That was AMAZING!
and for the thingy where we leave our emails, mines
Omgosh though.
That was.. awesome :D
4/19/2007 c18 6Skido
*flails* I am in love with this story. IN LOVE. It's beautiful, and I could see everything, like in a movie or something. Especially the part where Amy first sees Tristan's eyes. That's my favourite part. Just ... BAM, and I could actually see his face in my head. I loved how you made his character out to be. It felt real to me, and I felt completely sorry for him. And Lexus? I've never felt so pleased at fictional revenge in ... ever! Added to my favourites. Most definitely.
6Skido*flails* I am in love with this story. IN LOVE. It's beautiful, and I could see everything, like in a movie or something. Especially the part where Amy first sees Tristan's eyes. That's my favourite part. Just ... BAM, and I could actually see his face in my head. I loved how you made his character out to be. It felt real to me, and I felt completely sorry for him. And Lexus? I've never felt so pleased at fictional revenge in ... ever! Added to my favourites. Most definitely.
4/13/2007 c18 28invizygirl
aww this was an adorable story. i think you're rite to have left him blind. it added to the believability. if he'd "miraculously" recovered it woulda been too cheese. good work.
28invizygirlaww this was an adorable story. i think you're rite to have left him blind. it added to the believability. if he'd "miraculously" recovered it woulda been too cheese. good work.
4/12/2007 c18 22Kohlomere
I loved that! It was terrific! There are no words to describe just how much I love the story! Great job, E.
22KohlomereI loved that! It was terrific! There are no words to describe just how much I love the story! Great job, E.
4/7/2007 c18 Shishou
Ooh, this was wonderful! During the story, I was worrying if you'd make him see again, which would be a very, very bad cliche. So, I'm very, very glad you didn't.
And for the whole publishing gig:
Ooh, this was wonderful! During the story, I was worrying if you'd make him see again, which would be a very, very bad cliche. So, I'm very, very glad you didn't.
And for the whole publishing gig:
4/7/2007 c16 Shishou
As long as this doesn't turn into, "She'll never walk again; I'm sorry," then this won't be Lifetime Network-ish!
As long as this doesn't turn into, "She'll never walk again; I'm sorry," then this won't be Lifetime Network-ish!
4/7/2007 c15 Shishou
Not only did I almost cry when Amy said this:
“You know, Tristan Edmund, you really make a job,” I watched him flinch at the word, “suck.”
But for the first time in my life, I actually laughed evilly at a character in a story at the end of this character.
Bravissimo! Bravissimo!
Not only did I almost cry when Amy said this:
“You know, Tristan Edmund, you really make a job,” I watched him flinch at the word, “suck.”
But for the first time in my life, I actually laughed evilly at a character in a story at the end of this character.
Bravissimo! Bravissimo!