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5/7/2007 c7 twyx
Umm - cold you PM me - coz i dont understand the charlie dinner thing... But great work!
5/7/2007 c18 1UniquelyNeverSeen
i loved it :) and i like how you kept him blind it just wouldn't be the same if he became "perfect" again... m Jane Eyre... very good movie :)
5/4/2007 c18 cherrystraw
really good! keep writing!
5/4/2007 c17 Kythia
No matter how many times I read this story, I always love it!

Congratualtions on writing this amazing piece. I hope that someday you will able to get some things published so that I can have your work on my bookshelves. :)
4/30/2007 c18 Affluentheartache
Great story.
4/27/2007 c18 Rebelistic
Hey! I just read your story, and it's fan-tas-tic! Your an awesome writer, keep it up!
4/24/2007 c18 sierra
oh gosh,

i wish i could write as well as you. i mean, i do have several stories under my belt, but i'm stuck for ideas. argh. writer's block can be plenty frustrating. his eyes rocks. i'm saving this in favorites. haha.

continue writing!

4/21/2007 c1 bittersweet nostalgia
I love this story. It was so, wow. Though it was a little fast paced, it was believable.

You could make a movie of it:|

not kidding.
4/19/2007 c18 3PhotographanAngel
Oh my gosh.

That was AMAZING!

and for the thingy where we leave our emails, mines

Omgosh though.

That was.. awesome :D
4/19/2007 c18 6Skido
*flails* I am in love with this story. IN LOVE. It's beautiful, and I could see everything, like in a movie or something. Especially the part where Amy first sees Tristan's eyes. That's my favourite part. Just ... BAM, and I could actually see his face in my head. I loved how you made his character out to be. It felt real to me, and I felt completely sorry for him. And Lexus? I've never felt so pleased at fictional revenge in ... ever! Added to my favourites. Most definitely.
4/13/2007 c18 28invizygirl
aww this was an adorable story. i think you're rite to have left him blind. it added to the believability. if he'd "miraculously" recovered it woulda been too cheese. good work.
4/12/2007 c18 22Kohlomere
I loved that! It was terrific! There are no words to describe just how much I love the story! Great job, E.
4/7/2007 c18 Shishou
Ooh, this was wonderful! During the story, I was worrying if you'd make him see again, which would be a very, very bad cliche. So, I'm very, very glad you didn't.

And for the whole publishing gig:
4/7/2007 c16 Shishou
As long as this doesn't turn into, "She'll never walk again; I'm sorry," then this won't be Lifetime Network-ish!
4/7/2007 c15 Shishou
Not only did I almost cry when Amy said this:

“You know, Tristan Edmund, you really make a job,” I watched him flinch at the word, “suck.”

But for the first time in my life, I actually laughed evilly at a character in a story at the end of this character.

Bravissimo! Bravissimo!
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