for Quesitioning Why?3/23/2005 c1 
113fRoZeN tIgEr TeArS
icy.sreiously got shivers...but i dunno if its just the poem \, or hte combined fact that im sitting in mrs vonadas room and its FREEZINg in here.
113fRoZeN tIgEr TeArSicy.sreiously got shivers...but i dunno if its just the poem \, or hte combined fact that im sitting in mrs vonadas room and its FREEZINg in here.
3/19/2005 c1 22Squirrel Lejant
i like it, it is very good. a lot better than my first haiku...it was something about a butterfly and in the last line i needed another syllable so the final word was "yum!" it made me look like a freak. oh well tis true anyways...-Ev
22Squirrel Lejanti like it, it is very good. a lot better than my first haiku...it was something about a butterfly and in the last line i needed another syllable so the final word was "yum!" it made me look like a freak. oh well tis true anyways...-Ev
3/19/2005 c1 15Macca Lane
briant peom also the tiel adds a briant new dimension to it is briant poetic for a haiku
15Macca Lanebriant peom also the tiel adds a briant new dimension to it is briant poetic for a haiku
3/18/2005 c1 124Ketsurui-sama
I LOVE haikus! For your first haiku, this is exceptional. ^-^ I love how the shining moon and snow gives one a very pretty picture, but it's suddenly shot down by the thought of the snow bringing death. Very good job.
124Ketsurui-samaI LOVE haikus! For your first haiku, this is exceptional. ^-^ I love how the shining moon and snow gives one a very pretty picture, but it's suddenly shot down by the thought of the snow bringing death. Very good job.
3/18/2005 c1 TakeMyPhotoOffTheWall
Um..."Death has come again," doesn't exactly fit? This was rather far-fetched, and doesn't quite make entire sense. And maybe that's why I really like it. The fact that the meaning lies beneath and can most likely only be explained by you, is what makes it so beautiful.
Um..."Death has come again," doesn't exactly fit? This was rather far-fetched, and doesn't quite make entire sense. And maybe that's why I really like it. The fact that the meaning lies beneath and can most likely only be explained by you, is what makes it so beautiful.