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6/30/2007 c1 7xTheRedAngelx
oh my god, this was too creepy. which is good for the author, because thats what good authors do. :) kudos to you for being a stellar horror writer!
3/31/2007 c1 Jay-Ling

WELL, that was scary. Little girls + horror is a good mix.

Brilliant write.
11/27/2006 c1 3Da Vinci at Work


Violent. Haha. I like horror stories. Ring around the rosie...Very original. I like.
4/17/2006 c1 BicGirl
Well, that's disturbing.

On the other hand, well written and keeps the reader close. And there are no grammatical and spelling errors that I can see.

So, good job. Maybe disturbing was what you were going for. :)
3/4/2006 c1 Jauvas
umm that was sadly crap no that i would expeced more it was aparint she would kill her self. i would like to se you wright something other than horror to see if you are still so bad

Have a nice day- your friend ~Jauvas]`
11/20/2005 c1 9Thomas Paxton
I've been looking for something decent to read for 30 minutes now. Thank you.

Creepy and disturbing imagery with a background drone that progressively gets louder.

Overall, well done.
10/24/2005 c1 12364 unbirthdays
sad. i like how u added the 'ring around the rosie'. it makes it sound frightening/sad, kinda disturbing to read.
10/23/2005 c1 Rachel
...is it just me...or do both of your horror stories look alike? "Be original," you said in review I quoted you on in my last review. You bloodthirsty hypocrite. Once again, just letting everyone know how you really are before they read your stuff.
9/9/2005 c1 24Moonjava
Wow, this is pretty good. I like how you connected a popular children's song with a creepy story. I saw something about this song on the HIstory Channel a while a go. The back ground information is interesting. Cool connection. I like it.
7/29/2005 c1 2Gagging Angel
Hmm, slightly disturbing in the least disturbing way possible. This seems positively Stephen King -ish, it's nice though, with its own bubble of creativity. Considering that this is originally a song about death I think that you couldn't have put better use to it, the words flow very delicately from the singing, and suits it perfectly. Lovely, really.
6/25/2005 c1 raptorn432
I apologize. Calling you a coward was an unprovoked attack on you, and I apologize for attacking you. You have the right not to argue if you choose. I'm sorry. Raptor
4/13/2005 c1 81TwystedFate
I like it. o_o;
3/26/2005 c1 1soccerchic150gollyjee99apolla
holy crap! that was awesome! really creepy!
3/24/2005 c1 9TheSilverKitsune
Woah... creepy... Wowfulness...
3/21/2005 c1 47mystic-georgia
Reminds me of one of my poems I did called "Nursary Rhyme". Eerily good and I like the "innocent" Killer perspective.

*thumbs up*

[Side note: are you going to do a sequel to this?]
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