for Ring Around the Rosie6/30/2007 c1 
7xTheRedAngelx
oh my god, this was too creepy. which is good for the author, because thats what good authors do. :) kudos to you for being a stellar horror writer!
7xTheRedAngelxoh my god, this was too creepy. which is good for the author, because thats what good authors do. :) kudos to you for being a stellar horror writer!
3/31/2007 c1 Jay-Ling
*Shudders*
WELL, that was scary. Little girls + horror is a good mix.
Brilliant write.
*Shudders*
WELL, that was scary. Little girls + horror is a good mix.
Brilliant write.
11/27/2006 c1 3Da Vinci at Work
o_O
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Violent. Haha. I like horror stories. Ring around the rosie...Very original. I like.
3Da Vinci at Worko_O
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Violent. Haha. I like horror stories. Ring around the rosie...Very original. I like.
4/17/2006 c1 BicGirl
Well, that's disturbing.
On the other hand, well written and keeps the reader close. And there are no grammatical and spelling errors that I can see.
So, good job. Maybe disturbing was what you were going for. :)
Well, that's disturbing.
On the other hand, well written and keeps the reader close. And there are no grammatical and spelling errors that I can see.
So, good job. Maybe disturbing was what you were going for. :)
3/4/2006 c1 Jauvas
umm that was sadly crap no that i would expeced more it was aparint she would kill her self. i would like to se you wright something other than horror to see if you are still so bad
Have a nice day- your friend ~Jauvas]`
umm that was sadly crap no that i would expeced more it was aparint she would kill her self. i would like to se you wright something other than horror to see if you are still so bad
Have a nice day- your friend ~Jauvas]`
11/20/2005 c1 9Thomas Paxton
I've been looking for something decent to read for 30 minutes now. Thank you.
Creepy and disturbing imagery with a background drone that progressively gets louder.
Overall, well done.
9Thomas PaxtonI've been looking for something decent to read for 30 minutes now. Thank you.
Creepy and disturbing imagery with a background drone that progressively gets louder.
Overall, well done.
10/24/2005 c1 12364 unbirthdays
sad. i like how u added the 'ring around the rosie'. it makes it sound frightening/sad, kinda disturbing to read.
12364 unbirthdayssad. i like how u added the 'ring around the rosie'. it makes it sound frightening/sad, kinda disturbing to read.
10/23/2005 c1 Rachel
...is it just me...or do both of your horror stories look alike? "Be original," you said in review I quoted you on in my last review. You bloodthirsty hypocrite. Once again, just letting everyone know how you really are before they read your stuff.
...is it just me...or do both of your horror stories look alike? "Be original," you said in review I quoted you on in my last review. You bloodthirsty hypocrite. Once again, just letting everyone know how you really are before they read your stuff.
9/9/2005 c1 24Moonjava
Wow, this is pretty good. I like how you connected a popular children's song with a creepy story. I saw something about this song on the HIstory Channel a while a go. The back ground information is interesting. Cool connection. I like it.
24MoonjavaWow, this is pretty good. I like how you connected a popular children's song with a creepy story. I saw something about this song on the HIstory Channel a while a go. The back ground information is interesting. Cool connection. I like it.
7/29/2005 c1 2Gagging Angel
Hmm, slightly disturbing in the least disturbing way possible. This seems positively Stephen King -ish, it's nice though, with its own bubble of creativity. Considering that this is originally a song about death I think that you couldn't have put better use to it, the words flow very delicately from the singing, and suits it perfectly. Lovely, really.
2Gagging AngelHmm, slightly disturbing in the least disturbing way possible. This seems positively Stephen King -ish, it's nice though, with its own bubble of creativity. Considering that this is originally a song about death I think that you couldn't have put better use to it, the words flow very delicately from the singing, and suits it perfectly. Lovely, really.
6/25/2005 c1 raptorn432
I apologize. Calling you a coward was an unprovoked attack on you, and I apologize for attacking you. You have the right not to argue if you choose. I'm sorry. Raptor
I apologize. Calling you a coward was an unprovoked attack on you, and I apologize for attacking you. You have the right not to argue if you choose. I'm sorry. Raptor
3/21/2005 c1 47mystic-georgia
Reminds me of one of my poems I did called "Nursary Rhyme". Eerily good and I like the "innocent" Killer perspective.
*thumbs up*
[Side note: are you going to do a sequel to this?]
47mystic-georgiaReminds me of one of my poems I did called "Nursary Rhyme". Eerily good and I like the "innocent" Killer perspective.
*thumbs up*
[Side note: are you going to do a sequel to this?]